Nabeshin Danbei Ayanami 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 04-26-02, id: 204931
Author has written 12 stories | Evangelion, Slayers, Love Hina, Ranma, and Sailor Moon.
β : Nabeshin Danbei Ayanami is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I like to make minimal changes to actual plot, because I wouldn't beta something that doesn't start with a workable plot. The plot, to me, is the creators baby. At best I can be used as a muse. My "beta-reader" style is to pretty much proofread, and make recommendations for description or word replacement or addition. I like to add "flair" and "life" to a chapter.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I'm good with simple and eloquent description. I'm also good at using the minimal amount of words to leave a particular, mood or impression. I'm also a grammar, punctuation, and word/text flow fanatic. Text must be properly parsed to be easily understood! Even if it isn't bad grammar! Ease of reading is important to me. I can use punctuation and text flow to demonstrate moods and pauses in a readers head as if I were speaking to them.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
My ability to make deep characters is lacking. They aren't cardboard cutouts, but...I have read many fanfics where I felt humbled by their ability to paint a character.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
Action/Adventure and Drama.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Fluffy, empty, WAFF.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Anime Evangelion
Anime Love Hina
Anime Ranma
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for