JadedWarrior 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 10-28-09, id: 2129307
Author has written 5 stories | Pokémon, Alice in Wonderland, 2010, Harry Potter, and Sweeney Todd.
β : JadedWarrior is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
Halloo. :3 I'm new at the whole Beta-reading business, but it sounds like something I could get into to improve my writing and improve the writings of others, so here I am. I try to keep all criticism constructive, but I will always make changes. As such, I will not tolerate any whining/flaming on the subject. Want me to beta read? I'll be happy to. But please, mind your manners. AND GIVE MEH CHOCOLATE! XD
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I like to lay the imagery pretty thick on my stories, so don't be surprised if I ask you to add more description. I have also been told that I have good instincts for "pace," or when things need to happen to one character or another. If you struggle with either of these, (i.e, reviewers tell you that your stories drag on too much, go too fast, ect.) then I can definitely help you.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I'm new to the betareading field, so you may have to be patient with me. As a writer, my sentence structures tend to be similar as well. (Look at the previous two sentences and you'll get what I mean.) Sometimes, when I write multiple-chapter fics, I'll write one action-packed chapter and lose the motivation to start the next, calmer one. (I don't know if that'll help, but I'm just throwing that out there.)
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I like Pokemon Colusseum, fanfics that are a bit darker than their originals, Alice in Wonderland, fantasy, and non-cheesy romance. Also, if you've written something that 1000 other people haven't already (*COUGH* TWILIGHT, ZELDA, NARUTO *COUGH*) I'll be more interested.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
An overused plotline, cliches, things you obviously haven't put much effort into, and things with cursing/sexual themes/excessive gore. The gore would have to be REEEEALLY excessive, because I've read Warriors, and that's pretty gory. Don't laugh. I'm not even kidding. It is. I've never read Twilight, and i'm not a big fan, but I will beta Twilight fics... so long as they aren't completely and utterly improbable. Like, Edward dumps Bella for the author, or something. -_______-
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » T
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Movie 101/102 Dalmatians
Book A Child Called It
Movie A Christmas Story
Book Adventures of Huckleberry Finn
Movie Adventures of Sharkboy and Lavagirl
Book Alice in Wonderland
Movie Alice in Wonderland, 2010
Cartoon American Dragon: Jake Long
Book Animal Farm
Misc Anime X-overs
Cartoon Arthur
Cartoon Avatar: Last Airbender
Book Beka Cooper series
Cartoon Berenstian Bears
Book Black Stallion
Cartoon Blue's Clues
Cartoon Captain Planet
Cartoon Catscratch
Cartoon Chalkzone
Book Charlie and the Chocolate Factory
Game Chibi-Robo!
Book Chronicles of Narnia
Misc Digimon/Pokemon
Misc Game X-overs
Book Harry Potter
Game Harvest Moon
Anime Ichigo Mashimaro
Book Inkheart
Game Kingdom Hearts
Game Legend of Zelda
Game Lost In Blue
Game Luigi's Mansion
Misc Misc. Anime/Manga
Misc Misc. Movies
Anime Ouran High School Host Club
Game Pokémon
Game Rune Factory: A Fantasy Harvest Moon
Cartoon SpongeBob SquarePants
Game Star Wars
Game Super Smash Brothers
Cartoon Totally Spies
Misc Vocaloid
Book Warriors
Game Webkinz
Cartoon Winx Club
Anime Wolf's Rain
Book Wonderful Wizard of Oz
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for