Icewine Rose 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 02-22-10, id: 2265689
Author has written 4 stories | The Santa Clause, Voyage of the Unicorn, and Great Mouse Detective.
Icewine Rose is a registered beta reader but is currently not accepting beta reading requests: on hiatus/vacation.
Icewine Rose has left a vacation message:
Overwhelm is a bitch. I should be back soon, and in a better mental state to properly critique your works. Thank you for your patience.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
'Sup? I provide troll-esque reviews in a safe environment, so you can see a worst case scenario of a dick reader without the added side effect of me actually being a dick. Think less edgelord, and more Mystery Science Theater 3000. My goal is to make you laugh while enlightening some points of your story that people might see as silly, cliche, weak, or will pull them out of the story. All comments will be aimed at the writing itself, not you as an author because that's douchier than I'm willing to go. Please note: I am beta-reading your work, not editing it. I will read your story, take notes and give you a summary explanation of my suggestions/fixes on whichever chat venue you prefer. I will not be doing line by line edits unless specifically asked for, and do not ask me to edit it unless you're willing to pay for it. Like, with real money. Dead serious.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
General story patterns, characterizations, proper use of tropes, help with tone issues, how to present the story in an effective manner without reminding your audience they're reading a story. Basically, how to control the information you're giving your audience and whether it's creating the effect you want.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
Fucking comas! That aside, while I have a passable grasp of grammar and spelling, some of the finer points evade me. The only other thing that could be an issue is if I only have a fuzzy memory of the source material. There are few that I am fluent in, so I may not pick up on inside jokes or references as readily. However, I will also tell you if I'm unsure or don't know something. I'm more than comfortable in my fallibility.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I'm actually open to reading anything, honestly. Any fandom I've checked off on here is one I have at least a passing familiarity with, but I'm open to reading stuff from fandoms I'm not a part of or know nothing about. Really, the best course of action is to just ask, 'cause I'm probably gonna say yes. I can appreciate a good story, regardless of the genre.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
In terms of writing, nothing. The worse it is, the easier to mock! Mwahahahaha! But seriously, I'm about presentation, not the subject matter. I'm an adult. I can handle it. Come at me! I also tend to have the view of "it doesn't matter if I ship it, just tell me a good story and I'll go with it" mindset. However, butthurt authors prickling that I pointed out issues with their perfect story irritates me, especially since they asked me to beta read. Please don't do that. It's immature. Either take the criticism or don't ask for it in the first place. It's okay if you just want to write for fun and put it up for whoever wants it, regardless of quality. But if you want me to beta-read, please keep in mind that I'm trying to help, and I have all the best intentions for you and your work. Unless I'm actually being an asshole. Then all bets are off.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Movie 13th Warrior
Play 1776
Movie 1776, 1972
Book 1984
Movie 28 Days Later
Play 9 to 5
Movie A Bugs Life
Book A Christmas Carol
Movie A Christmas Story
Book A Little Princess
Play A Midsummer's Night Dream
Movie A Nightmare on Elm Street
Movie Addams Family
Movie Airplane!
Game Akinator
Movie Aladdin
Movie Alice in Wonderland
Game Alice mare
Movie All Dogs go to Heaven
Game Amnesia: The Dark Descent
Book Anna Dressed in Blood
Play Annie
Movie Annie
Movie Aristocats
Cartoon Avatar: Last Airbender
Movie Avengers
Comic Baby Blues
Movie Back to the Future
Movie Bad Seed
Movie Bambi
Tv Bear In The Big Blue House
Movie Beauty and the Beast
Movie Bedknobs and Broomsticks
Game Bendy and the Ink Machine
Book Beowulf
Book Bible
Movie Big Hero 6
Movie Big Trouble in Little China
Tv Bill Nye The Science Guy!
Game BioShock
Movie Black Cauldron
Movie Black Swan, 2010
Movie Blade Runner
Movie Blazing Saddles
Cartoon Blue's Clues
Cartoon Bob's Burgers
Tv Bones
Movie Brothers Grim
Tv Buffy: The Vampire Slayer
Play Bye Bye Birdie
Movie Cabin in the Woods
Comic Calvin & Hobbes
Movie Captain America
Book Captain Underpants
Movie Casablanca
Game Cat Lady
Play Cats
Book Charlie and the Chocolate Factory
Movie Chicken Run
Movie Chitty Chitty Bang Bang
Book Chronicles of Narnia
Play Cinderella
Movie Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs
Cartoon Codename: Kids Next Door
Game Cooking Mama
Book Coraline
Movie Corpse Bride
Movie Creature from the Black Lagoon
Movie Crimson Peak
Game Crooked Man
Book Cthulhu Mythos
Comic Cyanide and Happiness
Cartoon Cyberchase
Movie Dangerous Liaisons
Movie Dark Crystal
Movie Dead Poets Society
Game Deponia
Movie Despicable Me
Movie Doctor Dolittle
Movie Doctor Strange
Movie Dogma
Game Doki Doki Literature Club
Movie Don't Be Afraid of the Dark
Cartoon Don't Hug Me, I'm Scared
Game Don't Starve
Play Dr. Horrible's Sing-Along Blog
Book Dr. Seuss series
Tv Drake & Josh
Movie E.T.: The Extra-Terrestrial
Movie Edward Scissorhands
Misc Egyptian Mythology
Comic ElfQuest
Game Emily is Away
Movie Emperor's New Groove
Game Epic Mickey
Movie Evil Dead/Army of Darkness
Book Fahrenheit 451
Movie Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them
Book Fault in Our Stars
Play Fiddler on the Roof
Movie Fifth Element
Movie Finding Nemo
Game Five Nights at Freddy´s
Comic For Better or For Worse
Tv Fraggle Rock
Movie Frankenweenie
Cartoon Frosty the Snowman
Movie Frozen
Anime Future Diary/未来日記
Movie Galaxy Quest
Movie Ghost
Movie Ghost and Mrs. Muir
Movie Ghost Rider
Game Ghostbusters
Movie Ghostbusters
Game Gone Home
Book Good Omens
Cartoon Gravity Falls
Movie Great Mouse Detective
Misc Greek Mythology
Cartoon Grim Adventures of Billy & Mandy
Movie Grudge
Movie Guardians of the Galaxy
Play Guys and Dolls
Movie Hairspray
Movie Halloween
Book Harry Potter
Movie Haunted Mansion
Tv Have Gun Will Travel
Play Heathers
Movie Hellraiser
Movie Hercules
Tv Hogan's Heroes
Movie Hole, 2009
Play Holy Musical B@man!
Cartoon Horrible Histories
Tv Horrible Histories
Movie Hotel Transylvania
Movie House of Wax
Movie House on Haunted Hill
Movie How to Train Your Dragon
Movie Hunchback of Notre Dame
Book Hunger Games
Game Ib
Movie Igor
Game Imscared
Cartoon In a Heartbeat
Movie Independence Day
Movie Indiana Jones
Movie Inside Out
Book Invention of Hugo Cabret
Movie Iron Giant
Movie It's a Wonderful Life
Cartoon Jane and the Dragon
Movie Jeepers Creepers
Book Jeeves
Play Jesus Christ Superstar
Play Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat
Movie King's Speech
Tv Kolchak: The Night Stalker
Movie Kubo and the Two Strings
Movie Kung Fu Panda
Movie Labyrinth
Movie Ladyhawke
Movie Last Unicorn
Tv Lazytown
Game Left 4 Dead
Cartoon Legend of Korra
Movie Lego Movie
Play Les Misérables
Game Limbo
Movie Lion King
Movie Little Mermaid
Play Little Shop of Horrors
Movie Logan's Run
Movie Love Actually
Tv Lucifer
Play Macbeth
Game Mad Father
Book Madeline series
Tv MAGNUM P.I.
Play Mame
Movie Man in the Iron Mask
Movie Mary Poppins
Movie Mask of Zorro/Legend of Zorro
Movie Matilda
Movie Meet the Robinsons
Movie Megamind
Movie Men In Black
Tv Mentalist
Movie Mickey, Donald, Goofy: The Three Musketeers
Game Minecraft
Movie Minutemen
Movie Miracle on 34th Street
Movie Moana
Movie Monsters Inc.
Movie Monsters vs. Aliens
Tv Monty Python
Movie Monty Python
Play Monty Python's Spamalot
Movie Mr. Holland's Opus
Movie Mr. Smith Goes to Washington
Play Much Ado About Nothing
Movie Mummy
Tv Muppet Show
Movie Muppet Treasure Island
Movie My Fair Lady
Play My Fair Lady
Cartoon My Little Pony
Misc Mythology
Movie National Treasure
Game Neko Atsume: Kitty Collector
Movie Night at the Museum
Book Night Circus
Game Night in the Woods
Movie Nightmare Before Christmas
Movie No Country for Old Men
Misc Norse Mythology
Movie North by Northwest
Tv Numb3rs
Play Nutcracker
Game Octodad
Tv Odd Couple
Play Oedipus the King
Game OFF
Play Oklahoma!
Movie Omen
Tv Once Upon a Time
Game One Night at Flumpty's
Play Othello
Game Outlast
Cartoon Over the Garden Wall
Movie Pagemaster
Movie Pan's Labyrinth/El laberinto del fauno
Movie ParaNorman
Comic Peanuts
Book Perfume: The Story of a Murderer/Das Parfum
Book Perks of Being a Wallflower
Movie Peter Pan
Play Phantom of the Opera
Movie Pianist
Movie Pinocchio
Movie Pirates of the Caribbean
Movie Pirates! Band of Misfits
Movie Pixar shorts
Movie Plan 9 from Outer Space
Movie Polar Express
Game Portal
Game Presentable Liberty
Book Pride and Prejudice
Movie Princess and the Frog
Movie Princess Bride
Comic Property of Hate
Game Psychonauts
Movie Pumpkinhead
Cartoon Recess
Movie Repo! The Genetic Opera
Cartoon Rick and Morty
Movie Ring, 2002
Movie Road to Eldorado
Movie Rudolph the Red Nosed Reindeer
Cartoon Salad Fingers
Misc SCP Foundation Mythos
Book Sea of Trolls
Movie Secret of NIMH
Movie Serenity
Book Series Of Unfortunate Events
Play Seven Brides for Seven Brothers
Play Shakespeare
Cartoon Shaun the Sheep
Tv Sherlock
Movie Sherlock Holmes
Movie Shrek
Movie Silence of the Lambs/Hannibal
Movie Sinister
Movie Sister Act
Book Six of Crows
Movie Sixth Sense
Movie Sky Captain and the World of Tomorrow
Movie Sleeping Beauty
Game Slender
Movie Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs
Cartoon Sofia the First
Movie Sound of Music
Play South Pacific
Game Splatterhouse
Game Spooky's Jump Scare Mansion
Game Stanley Parable
Book Stardust
Tv StarTrek: The Next Generation
Tv StarTrek: The Original Series
Cartoon Steven Universe
Movie Stuart Little
Movie Swan Princess
Movie Sweeney Todd
Play Sweeney Todd
Movie Tangled
Movie Tarzan
Game Team Fortress 2
Movie Ten Commandments
Movie Terminator
Movie Texas Chainsaw Massacre
Movie The Good, the Bad and the Ugly/Il buono, il brutto, il cattivo
Movie The Santa Clause
Movie Thor
Play Thoroughly Modern Millie
Game To the Moon
Movie Tombstone
Movie Total Recall, 1990
Movie Total Recall, 2012
Movie Toy Story
Movie Treasure Planet
Movie Tremors
Movie True Grit, 2010
Tv TV Commercials
Game Undertale
Game Until Dawn
Movie Up
Cartoon Veggie Tales
Game Viscera Cleanup
Movie Voyage of the Unicorn
Movie WALL-E
Cartoon Wallace & Gromit
Movie Wallace and Gromit
Comic Watchmen
Book Watership Down
Game We Happy Few
Misc Welcome to Night Vale
Movie West Side Story
Movie White Christmas
Movie Who Framed Roger Rabbit
Play Wicked
Game Wii Sports Resort
Tv Wild Wild West
Movie Winnie the Pooh
Book Winnie-the-Pooh
Game Witch's House
Movie Wizard of Oz
Game Wolf Among Us
Movie Wolf Man, 1941
Movie Woman in Black
Movie Wonder Woman
Cartoon WordGirl
Movie Wreck-It Ralph
Movie x-men
Game Yandere Simulator
Game Year Walk
Movie Year Without a Santa Claus
Play Young Frankenstein
Movie Zombieland
Movie Zootopia
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Parody
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Sci-Fi
Fantasy
Spiritual
Tragedy
Western
Crime
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship