kalezz 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 10-11-10, id: 2571963
Author has written 4 stories | Harry Potter.
β : kalezz is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I'm a very opinionated person and I'm not afraid to make SUGESTIONS where I feel nessicary, but I am also a writer too and fully understand why you want to keep something the way it is. I won't physically change anything on the document I'll just highlight it unless its changing your to you're. This is your's and only your's. I'll let you know what I know and feel from the peice and can help you create the desired effect you want your readers to feel. I can also tell you if your foreshadowing is to thick or to subtle. I can either be a partner in your story or a tool for you to use (mind OUT of the gutters), I just want to help improve your writing. The saying coming to my mind is, you can catch a man a fish and he'll eat for a day or you can teach him to fish and he eat for a lifetime.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
First of all honesty. If I get an absolute peice of crap, I wont tell you its a piece of crap but I'll defanatly offer segestions to make it better. I can easily spot plot holes and bad foreshadowing, I can help you make it more subtle. I'm not too too bad a grammer mostly just like stuff that doesn't make a whole lot of sence when you read it the first time other than that it really doesn't matter (do YOU care if your semi colon is out of place?... I don't) If I'm familiar with the story I can help you make it more ralalistic (ex. Hermione fom Harry Potter doesn't say "Like whatEVER, O M G I like, SO don't care".) Character interaction ect. Basically things that make the story flow nicer and I can make your writing level go up a bit.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I have a hard time with spelling and being firm on an idea, I'm kind of a push over. If I see something that REALLY needs to be changed, like having... family gut pop up in a Harry potter fic for NO reason (seen it happen, not pretty) and you don't change it they first couple times I tell you, chances are it'll stay up untill you get a nasty comment...
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
Naturally I like things I'm familiar with. Perferably books, I don't watch that much tv. I'm going to go through EVERYTHING on this website and put below everything I'm familiar with so it'll be long... I like Harry Potter, Twilight, Grey's Anatomy, Dexter, Mortal Instruments, Private,basically any book you can buy at chapters, I own and read 7 or 8 times... literally 100s of books in my room more in my basement and garage. We have insurance haha
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
the only things I don't do are animé and aliens just not my thing, sorry little green dudes... I'll do anything else
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Movie 17 Again
Movie 2012
Movie 27 Dresses
Book 32c That's Me
Movie A Christmas Story
Movie A Cinderella Story
Movie Ace Ventura
Movie Addams Family
Book Adventures of Huckleberry Finn
Book Anne of Green Gables series
Movie Annie
Movie Bee Movie
Tv Big Bang Theory
Movie Blades of Glory
Movie Blind Side, 2009
Movie Blood Diamond
Movie Book of Eli
Movie Breakfast Club
Movie Bridge to Terabithia
Book Burned, Ellen Hopkins
Movie Cars
Movie Catch Me If You Can, 2002
Movie Catch That Kid
Movie Catwoman
Book Charlie and the Chocolate Factory
Movie Charlie's Angels: The Movie
Book Charlotte's Web
Movie Cheaper by the Dozen
Movie Cheetah Girls
Book Chronicles of Narnia
Book City of Ember
Tv Criminal Minds
Book Curious George
Book Dear Dumb Diary
Tv Desperate Housewives
Movie Despicable Me
Movie Deuce Bigalow
Tv Dexter
Movie Diary of a Wimpy Kid
Movie Doctor Dolittle
Movie Easy A
Book Ella Enchanted
Movie Fired Up!
Book Girl Who Loved Tom Gordon
Tv Grey's Anatomy
Movie Hangover
Book Harry Potter
Book House of Night
Book How to Ditch Your Fairy
Book Immortals series, Alyson Noel
Book Inkheart
Movie John Tucker Must Die
Book Junie B. Jones Collection
Movie Longest Yard
Movie Mean Girls
Book Mortal Instruments
Book My Sister's Keeper, Jodi Picoult
Book Neverending Story
Book Night at the Museum
Book Outsiders
Movie Pacifier
Book Pet Sematary
Book Peter Pan
Book Pirates of the Caribbean: Jack Sparrow
Book Private
Book School of Night
Book Series Of Unfortunate Events
Book Seven Deadly Sins
Book Shadow Children series
Movie She's the Man
Movie Shutter Island
Book Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants
Movie Snatch
Book Time Master Trilogy
Book Time Traveler's Wife
Movie Transformers
Book Twilight
Book Uglies
Movie Ugly Truth
Movie Zombieland
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for