HarmonySoundown 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 08-28-11, id: 3203934
Author has written 15 stories | Inazuma Eleven/イナズマイレブン, Metal Fight Beyblade/メタルファイト ベイブレード, Hetalia - Axis Powers, Lord of the Rings, and Alex Rider.
β : HarmonySoundown is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
Well, I like reading the whole thing through, then finding the mistakes from top to bottom. I'm a person who rather uses more simple words for easier understanding, so I might simplify some words you wrote. But I will change the too-general words like 'said' to something like 'murmur', or 'whisper', or 'shout'.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
My strength in writing is how I sneak in information and I can show and not tell. Basically telling is just saying this person is called blablabla and he comes from Village Z, and he can speak over 500 languages or something. Showing, is saying his name, then by dialouge or actions show how he comes from Village Z and where the 500+ languages come in handy. I can also spot a lot of grammar mistakes.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
My weaknesses are writing in formal words and writing about badass people. I create some OCs that are kind of badass, but they turn out to be really nice and smiley and cheerful, which I am more used to writing about, so I can't really imitate badass people really well.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I would prefer some funny stories, since it's my pleasure to BetaRead it for you and have a good laugh. Just basically any kind of story.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Yaoi, Yuri, and M stories. And I'm not exactly into Romance but all my OCs have a crush, which is just ironic.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » T
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Anime Hetalia - Axis Powers
Anime Inazuma Eleven/イナズマイレブン
Book Lord of the Rings
Movie Parent Trap
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for