Corporal Tommy 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 10-29-12, id: 4332767
Author has written 13 stories | Strike Witches, Company of Heroes, Kantai Collection, and X-overs.
β : Corporal Tommy is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I am the one to make sure that if you want to use military terms, military hardware, military icons (I.E. famous military people), they are used in the proper manner and that the military personnel used are of the right personality and bio. For Example: If you want to use Erwin Rommel and you make him a uncaring and bloodthirsty general just because he was apart of the wrong group then you have done wrong. I also would like to make sure that you have good historical accuracy in you story. So that means I make sure that if you writing a story during a certain era (especially 1930s to 1950s) I will point out those aspects that do not fit in, (Unless the story is an AU, something like Naruto or time travel). Also if you need help with deciding a personality for a character you have, I can help.
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I am very good at writing war and historical stories. I am an expert all things related to military. I am also a big buff of World War 2. I am quite well versed with Strike Witches, Kantai Collection and Arpeggio of Blue. I am quite good at making a personality for characters. I am very tolerable with profanities and sexual references.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I am not particularly good at writing romance though I am getting better I sometimes forget to write parts of my stories. I have a bad tendency to be very if not overly detailed on military stuff and not everything else. I am not very good at describing things (I can in my head but I can't put it to words, in simple terms I am speechless at anything that would need describing). I don't really like killing off characters even if their death was crucial for the plot, I will always have a bad feeling about it. I can get very angry easily. I can become a bit biased on certain topics. I am very bad with acronyms and short forms.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I am okay with Ace Combat, Strike Witches, Kantai Collection, Arpeggio of Blue Steel stories. I am absolutely fine with World War 2 or WW2 related/themed stories. I have no problems with war themed or related stories. I have no problem with Pokemon stories (but I am little rusty in my Pokemon department, I stopped keeping up with Pokemon after Black and White). I am okay with Digimon stories (Like Pokemon, I am a bit rusty).
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
I am not fond of Space or futuristic related stories but I will try. (Not that I hate them it is just that it just get me hyped like 20th Century to 21st Century stuff). I am do not do well with yaoi stories. (I have no problem with gays but I prefer not so that I don't offend if I question why). I do not like super racist or negative stories. I greatly dislike Kamen Rider, Power Rangers, Ultraman stories (Sorry).
Beta Preferences
Language: English & Malay
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Anime Gate - Jietai Kare no Chi nite, Kaku Tatakeri
Game Kantai Collection
Anime Strike Witches
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for