CelesteWhite 's Beta Reader Profile
action: Send PM . Follow . Favorite
profile: p User Profile
since: 12-29-12, id: 4446651
Author has written 11 stories | Kickin' It, Rise of the Guardians, and How to Train Your Dragon.
β : CelesteWhite is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I don't have any expectations except if I criticize your work, don't take it the wrong way. I'm just trying to help and suggesting some things. I would NEVER be anywhere near mean. If I am being harsh, (I hope I'm not) then please tell me and I will try my best to stop. As a beta reader I would tell you what you could improve on and give suggestions. If anyone has writers block I would be happy to help.

If you do have writers block, don't sweat it! It doesn't mean you're a bad writer. It's actually something better writers get often. I strictly suggest not putting in any filler chapters. I did that, now I'm embarresed by that fanfic. I suggest asking your readers what they want to see. Something you can do is ask a friend about a lifechangeing event and see if you can fit that into your story, find a way to make it useful. Make sure that they're fine with you using it on a public site, or showing it to anybody for that matter.

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I love writing in point of view. You know what each character is thinking and feeling that way. Next best thing for me would be Third Person Omniscient. I don't like dialogue only stories but i will still read them. I'm really good with grammar.

Hold up! So I wrote that awhile ago. I LOVE writing in third person. It makes it so misterious. I just love it.

My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
Some spelling, where to put semi colons, (I get confused if it should be a comma instead.) and I would like to improve on using more of what the characters are thinking. I realize that some people use only dialogue and that's something I'd rather not do.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
Yes, I prefer Things i Know like Disney, Disney XD, and Nickelodeon shows and any movies or books I watched/read. I do watch some Teennick- Love the show H2O: Just Add Water. I think that's a really smart title. My favorite would be Kickin' It and Lab Rats (I'm addicted to Kick!) I'm not too much of an Auslly fan but I would have to actually see them as a couple to decide.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
anything rated T and up or something (Shows, Movies, Books, etc.) I am not familiar with. I'd rather not have dioluge. HOWEVER, if you want me to help you improve and add some thoughts into dioluge and make it a story instead of dioluge I would be honered to do so.
Beta Preferences
Language: English & Spanish
Content Rating: Fiction K » T
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Tv Austin & Ally
Book Emily Windsnap series
Tv Kickin' It
Tv Lab Rats, 2012
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for