ChiptuneImpulse 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 09-16-03, id: 456496
Author has written 57 stories | Fire Emblem, Inuyasha, Mario, Animal Crossing, Super Smash Brothers, Kingdom Hearts, Teen Titans, Batman, Teen Titans, Catcher in the Rye, Persona Series, Puella Magi Madoka Magica/魔法少女まどか★マギカ, Pokémon, Earthbound, K-ON!/けいおん!, and Furi Kuri: FLCL.
β : ChiptuneImpulse is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I mostly check to see if the plot is sturdy, ask questions that could possible help the reader improve in the next event or chapter or what might happen to the character and find spelling mistakes as well as suggesting to use other words or synonyms so the sentence makes sense. br /br /br /br /br /br /

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If someone reads my works please tell me if there are pacing issues, things move too fast, lack of build up, no foreshadowing, etc. OR a lack of great description for action. Also I tend to get wordy or re-explain things down the line without realizing, mostly because I forget about it unless I re-read what I am typing but then I forget what I am typing next...br /br /br /br /br /br /

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Me (When I have work or homework due the next day): He hit the bat. He started towards first base. He got there and smiled towards the next person to /br /br /br /br /br /br /br /br /br /br /br /br /

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Me (With a lot of time to work on stories which is never unless it's summer): He walked up to plate. He settled himself with a practice swing and tapped his foot on home plate. He bent into position and when he saw the ball fly towards him, he swung and it connected. It flew high into mid-field and the batter dropped the bat and with a grin of determination ran towards first. The ball started to descend and the batter reached the base. He saw his team mate step up to bat and flashed him a sign of confidence with a smile. The other batter returned it and felt assured.

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
After taking a year off to re-examing my love of writing I can say that I excel at character development and dynamics. Such as how characters are important to the plot, making them human and how to not write a mary sue.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
Grammar isn't my top priority, plot, spelling and details are. I also have trouble writing prose unless I REALLY take quality time to determine how I want a scene to look and play out.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I love stories with depth and little added touches to them. Bonus points if there is realistic qualities to it like: Fire pokemon shouldn't belong in caves or closed/small spaces since it makes the oxygen unbreathable OR Death occurs because the cells stop functioning and with the loss of heat that's being pumped through the body by blood and oxygen the cells work until rigor mortis sets in.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
I will not read anything cliche, copied or incomprehensible.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Game Earthbound
Anime K-ON!/けいおん!
Game Pokémon
Anime Puella Magi Madoka Magica/魔法少女まどか★マギカ
Movie Tron
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Humor
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Parody
Suspense
Fantasy
Tragedy
Crime
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship