EilayAdnayVolieay 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 03-05-04, id: 548260
Author has written 18 stories | Card Captor Sakura, Harry Potter, Fantastic 4, Four Brothers, Zoey 101, Final Fantasy VIII, Princess Diaries, Class of the Titans, CSI, Witch Hunter Robin, and Darkest Powers.
β : EilayAdnayVolieay is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I've been a writer on this site for a long time and I am currently taking a Writer's Craft course at my highschool to further my own skills as both a writer and editor. I have absolutely zero expectations of people who wish to have me as a beta-reader. Yes, /zero/ expectations. Too many stories on this site are very difficult and annoying to read, and I want to help get rid of stories like that and help people better format their work, as well as helping their overall story.

I can and will edit both your spelling and grammar. I will read through your work and tell you if I think something is holding it back, if it seems just too crazy to be included in the work, and offer suggestions for you to improve. Under no circumstances do you need to take these suggestions and implement them.

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I like to think that I am good at critiquing work in a fair manner. I'll tell you what I think is wrong with your writing, and explain why I think that. If I know the series you are writing for, I'll tell you if it's out of character and find out if that's intentional, or accidental. I'm usually pretty good at quickly getting a handle of what's "in character" and what's not, so I should be good that way. If requested, I can expand on things for you, make full suggestions and remove/add things in, but ONLY with your explicit permission. If you don't ask, I'll merely make the suggestion and leave it up to you.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I am not 100% grammatically correct, and so I will not always notice grammatical errors you make. I will, however, look to make sure that things look good and make sense.

I'm the type of person who hates things that are overly descriptive. Books that go on for pages explaining one thing are not enjoyable for me, so that said, I can't really expand on your description excessively. I can make suggestions and try, but I'm not the greatest at it.

Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I prefer romance stories, or stories with a romance sub-plot. It's what I usually write, so it's what I feel strongest in. I also like to beta stories that are things I have knowledge of, so that I can really help you keep it in that specific series universe. I like to beta work that I could actually see myself read as well.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Anything religious or heavy in historical information are not usually my cup of tea. If it's a twist on either of these things, I'll make an exception, but if it's not something I find interesting, I find it hard to fairly beta-read because I like to beta work that is something I would actually read.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Anime Card Captor Sakura
Cartoon Class of the Titans
Book Darkest Powers
Game Final Fantasy VIII
Book Hardy Boys/Nancy Drew
Book Harry Potter
Book Hunger Games
Anime Sailor Moon
Book Twilight
Anime Witch Hunter Robin
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Mystery
Horror
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Fantasy
Friendship