V Parallel 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 02-01-14, id: 5497933
Author has written 2 stories | League of Legends, and Kantai Collection.
β : V Parallel is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I enjoy reading. Give me something to read, and I'll give you feedback. Let me know how involved you want me to be in the process. I can give feedback/opinions only, or I can suggest edits to restructure on a sentence/paragraph/scene/chapter level.

I prefer to use google docs for feedback (just upload & set sharing to 'anyone can comment' & when linking it in a PM, replace the periods with spaces so FFN doesn't censor it), because of the ease of adding comments and edit suggestions.

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
Individual words: I'll be closely watching adjectives, adverbs, repeated words, word choice, etc. If you have a wordy writing style, I may suggest removing some of the extraneous words. If sentences are too short and everything is moving too fast, I may suggest sprucing up your paragraphs (unless it's an action scene, of course).

Dialogue: Making it flow smoothly (proper syntax!) and keeping everyone in character.

Structure: Usage of commas (I love commas) and keeping paragraphs small & properly connected.

My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
High expectations: If something's not working, I may just say rewrite, rather than fixing it.

Emotions/Romance: I'll be able to leave feedback, but don't expect anything too insightful.

Scene descriptions: I'll tell you when a scene is lacking, or when too much time is spent describing it (and consequently boring the reader), and I can catch 'floating heads syndrome', but won't always offer suggestions on how to fix it - the author envisions the setting the best, and it should be his/her job to describe it.

Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
Any of the following, or combination thereof: Yuri, intelligent/rational protagonist and/or antagonist, clever plot twists, character drama (good character interactions), humour, multi-chapter story
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Game Kantai Collection
Game League of Legends
Anime RWBY
Anime Sound! Euphonium/響け!ユーフォニアム
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for