| MonJoh 's Beta Reader Profile
Author has written 17 stories | Merlin, Star Wars, Doctor Who, and Harry Potter.
β : MonJoh is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
|Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I am a beginning writer, as we all are, but I read everything critically thinking about how I would improve if it was mine. I do not expect you to act on every one of my suggestions but I do encourage you to at least consider each point. I will check for grammar/spelling/punctuation but I expect the work to already be proofread, my main focus will be on the same kind of feedback you would get in a creative writing class (which I highly recommend for anyone - they are great!).
|My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I will look for showing versus telling, dramatization versus narrative, perspective/POV, clarity, plot holes, and basics of punctuation.
|My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I tend to focus on what could be improved and forget to highlight all the good parts. I will not be able to spot Americanisms and I might miss cliches.
|Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
Fandoms I am familiar with and general to teen rated material.
|Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Mature content and work that has not been proofread.
|Content Rating: Fiction K » T
|Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
|Movie A League of Their Own|
Tv Agent Carter
Movie Captain America
Book Crystal Cave
Tv Doctor Who
Tv Get Smart
Book Harry Potter
Tv I Dream of Jeannie
Tv Orphan Black
|Movie Princess Bride|
Movie Star Wars
Tv StarTrek: The Original Series
Movie Witches of Eastwick
Movie Wizard of Oz
Movie X-Men: The Movie
|Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for