MonJoh 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 12-24-14, id: 6365883
Author has written 17 stories | Merlin, Star Wars, Doctor Who, and Harry Potter.
β : MonJoh is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I am a beginning writer, as we all are, but I read everything critically thinking about how I would improve if it was mine. I do not expect you to act on every one of my suggestions but I do encourage you to at least consider each point. I will check for grammar/spelling/punctuation but I expect the work to already be proofread, my main focus will be on the same kind of feedback you would get in a creative writing class (which I highly recommend for anyone - they are great!).
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I will look for showing versus telling, dramatization versus narrative, perspective/POV, clarity, plot holes, and basics of punctuation.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I tend to focus on what could be improved and forget to highlight all the good parts. I will not be able to spot Americanisms and I might miss cliches.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
Fandoms I am familiar with and general to teen rated material.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Mature content and work that has not been proofread.
Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » T
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Movie A League of Their Own
Tv Agent Carter
Movie Avengers
Tv Bewitched
Movie Captain America
Book Crystal Cave
Tv Doctor Who
Tv Firefly
Tv Get Smart
Book Harry Potter
Book Hobbit
Tv I Dream of Jeannie
Tv Merlin
Tv Orphan Black
Movie Princess Bride
Movie Serenity
Tv Sherlock
Movie Splash
Movie Star Wars
Tv StarTrek: The Original Series
Movie Thor
Tv Torchwood
Movie Witches of Eastwick
Movie Wizard of Oz
Movie X-Men: The Movie
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for