Moshy H 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 10-04-04, id: 682221
Author has written 3 stories | Inuyasha, Twilight, and Invader Zim.
β : Moshy H is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
As a beta reader, there are some things that I expect from a writer, especially if they are trying to post their work. For one thing, they have to have a good grasp on the English language. You may ask what that means, but if you read over your work and think to yourself whether or not your work has the English language down, then you don’t have it. But if you nodded as you read what I expected, then you know for sure that it won’t be a problem.

Another thing is to have good spelling and grammar. Now, I am not asking for perfection but simple words should be spelled correctly. This statement does in fact apply to their, they’re and there.

Last thing, if you are seriously going to post your work, then I would prefer that you didn’t give me a story that was entirely chat-speak or abbreviated just because you were too lazy to type out the entire name. Now, if it serves purpose in the story, like two characters are texting or something is abbreviated in the fandom, then that’s different.

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I like to think that if I list a fandom under my beta preferences that I have either resources to find information or have seen it and understand it completely. So, should your story fall within one of those fandoms, you can be assured that you won’t have to worry about inaccurate information or fandom screw-ups. That aside, English is my first language and spelling isn’t an issue at all. If anything, I could just use spell-check.

Now, I can come to you both as a reader and a writer, since I do both on a daily basis. From these two perspectives, I can see what its like to view it firsthand as well as see what is underneath and find ways to bring it out a bit more.

I just have to request that if you are planning on discontinuing a story, contact me. Don’t let me sit at home, putting aside time for your story when you aren’t even going to finish it. To solve this, I would advise having at least two chapters already done, so you can send me a chapter while you take time off or work on another chapter.

Last things, I will not sugar-coat the truth. If your story is a bit random and I know it will definitely get flamed for either stupidity or clichéd reasons, I will tell you so we can both work on changing it. Should you want someone to give a thousand compliments and only one tweak, then I suggest you find someone else, because in reality, no story is so perfect that it can go without constructive criticism.

My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
If you look on my written stories, you can see that I have two that are unfinished. Well, I ran out of steam, lost interest, ended up mocking my own work or got hit with unbearable writer’s block. So definitely finishing stuff when pressured in writing is not something I can handle and I admit it.

So, if you want me as your beta, I have to insist that you not post your story until we are both at the end of your story, trying to wrap up. With this, you don’t have to worry about losing readers and I don’t have to worry about rushing to get your chapter back. is not my life and I am pretty sure it isn’t yours either.

While this may come off as a contradiction, if you tell me you need help with a scene, I can do a bang up job, but also, if you tell me what a scene is about, what you want happening and how you want to happen, I can as well do just as fine. Depending on how you want it, I can adapt, but sometimes, too much structure or too much freedom will have me turning away from your work.

Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I do in fact like a lot of different things when it comes to reading and writing, but all in all, I have to say I would prefer romance, specifically gay romance. I am not personally experienced in being homosexual, but I have read a lot of the books, watched a bunch of the movies and completely pro-gay. Now, by saying this, I am not saying that I hate hetero-fiction, but just that I prefer slash over it…by a lot. This statement applies to all type of gay pairing, no matter the age, gender, relationship, or anything of the such. I feel that if two people can be slashed, even by a thin thread, then by all means, it’s okay in my book.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
I have a strict rule on rape fictions and unless it’s in the original fandom, completely canon, then I will not do it, at all. I do not mean to offend, but I find it un-necessary and completely…obscene to write it, especially if the victim is liking it. Mary Sues and Gary Stus will not be tolerated. Should you know that your character is a Mary Sue or Gary Stu and try to write it anyway, I will reject it. On the other hand, if you need help avoiding this horrible characterization, I will gladly lend my services to decrease the population of Sues and Stus. This statement applies to canon characters changed into being Sues and Stus.

I don’t like OOCness, so anything that has the characters freaking out and acting totally off the wall, I will not beta it-sorry. I am not a master sex guru, but I do read smut and whatnot, so I know what is hot and what is a complete turn-off. Also, I can provide input here and there; I just know that I can’t write it myself. So, it’s your call.

If you still want me as your beta, please PM me with a basic plot of your story and any other questions or information. Then we will go from there.

Thank you,

Moshy H.

Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Book 1-800-Where-R-You
Anime Ai no Kusabi
Cartoon Alvin and the chipmunks
Cartoon American Dragon: Jake Long
Anime Angelic Layer
Cartoon Avatar: Last Airbender
Cartoon Batman Beyond
Game Beyond Good & Evil
Cartoon Boondocks
Movie Bring it On
Cartoon Code Lyoko
Cartoon Codename: Kids Next Door
Tv CSI: New York
Cartoon Danny Phantom
Tv Drake & Josh
Cartoon Ed, Edd n Eddy
Anime Gravitation
Tv Grounded For Life
Anime Haru wo Daite Ita
Game Harvest Moon
Book Holes
Tv House, M.D.
Tv How I Met Your Mother
Tv iCarly
Movie Incredibles
Anime Inuyasha
Cartoon Invader Zim
Game Jak and Daxter
Anime Junjō Romantica
Cartoon Kim Possible
Game Kingdom Hearts
Tv Kyle XY
Anime Loveless
Movie Mean Girls
Book Mediator
Cartoon My Life as a Teenage Robot
Anime Oban Star-Racers
Tv Office
Anime Outlaw Star
Anime Papa to Kiss in the Dark
Cartoon Powerpuff Girls
Anime Read or Die
Tv Scrubs
Game Sonic the Hedgehog
Anime Spirited Away
Cartoon Teen Titans
Book Twilight
Anime Ultra Maniac
Cartoon Xiaolin Showdown
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for