Inuma Asahi De 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 04-24-05, id: 801176
Author has written 6 stories | Inuyasha, and Dragon Ball Z.
β : Inuma Asahi De is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I love working with character dialogue, mainly making sure the dialogue between characters is realistic and not too structured or over the top. I enjoy also enjoy working on characterization. br /br /br /br /

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I prefer to work with someone who doesn't mind looking at the 'little' details as I am very detailed oriented. I believe that it is the little movements characters make, from the blinking of an eye to biting their thumb during an awkward conversation, that really makes the story. So if you are looking at someone who is detail oriented I'm your person.

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I am good at plot development and working with writers block. I know how hard it is sometimes to get yourself through certain sections of a story when you don't know where to go or what you really want to do. I love bouncing ideas around until the perfect solution is found, whether it is writers block, storylines, or character development.br /br /br /br /

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As I said in my profile, I specialize in subtle details. I believe it is the little things, the simplest gestures that bring out the characters true selves.br /br /br /br /

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I am also very patient. I want your story to be the best it can be and the only way to do that is to take the time to really look at what you're writing down to the very last word. I believe it was Mark Twain who said, "The difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and a lightning bug." I want to make sure your story has a lot of lightning, just like I do in my own story. br /br /br /br /

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I do have a degree in English so you can trust I at least know the basis of spelling and grammar, although I don't think those things are the Backbone of a truly good story.

My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
Sometimes I am too detailed focused and forget the bigger picture but in the long run I don't think this is a major weakness more like an Achilles heel. br /br /br /br /

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I do not pay much attention to spelling and Grammar unless told specifically to do so. It is not my major priority but is instead a secondary thing that should be monitored but not kept on 24 hour watch.

Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I love working with suspense, horror, romance, drama, and mysteries. I have an almost sick fascination with the dirty side of the world and with the possibility of bringing it to light for readers everywhere.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
There are not many stories I will not touch, just send me your idea or your already existing story and I will let you know whether I want to work with it or not. I will say that I'm not a big fan of most alternative pairing in series where the pairing is already well known. br /br /br /br /

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For instance, in Inuyasha stories I want to stay with the main pairing Inu/Kag Mir/San although I will jump between Ses/Kagura and Ses/Rin.br /br /br /br /

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so if you aren't sure I'll like your pairing, PM me and I'll let you know. Sometimes if a plot really interest me I'll through caution to the wind and go with the none cannon character!

Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Anime Dragon Ball Z
Anime FAKE
Tv Gilmore Girls
Book Harry Potter
Anime Inuyasha
Anime Pet Shop of Horrors
Anime Rurouni Kenshin
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Poetry
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Fantasy
Tragedy
Hurt/Comfort