This is the revised First Rebel story. I decided to make big changes grammar and dialogue wise, though the plot's still the same. A former employee of Koopa has been betrayed and committed to Vista Hill Asylum. However, the employee escapes and it out for vengeance. Along with his allies, will the Rebel succeed? Find out.
Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,302 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 3/1/2013 - Published: 12/1/2012