Reviews for One Coarse Meal: Alternate Ending
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28
Guys,Look, It's Ok For Suicide,Cause There Is No Blood.
natnat chapter 1 . 6/24
how can i get alternate ending without using a video from youtube? is it rare?
SUP BRO chapter 1 . 6/23
SUp bro # $!# ! ! !
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15
Excellent work dude. A much better ending than the original episode and you managed to keep everyone in character to boot.
New Universe Returns chapter 1 . 5/27
OK, I honestly didn't find out that you already make this until I was scrolling your profile page, and I like it.

The first time I found out about the alternate ending to "A Pal for Gary" is when I read the article of that episode in Spongebob Squarepants Wiki and the comments in it.
robs chapter 1 . 4/29
LOL AMAZING, how about an alternative ending to a squidward torture porn!
Jasmine Scarthing chapter 1 . 4/24
*claps enthusiastically* See, this ending actually makes SENSE. In the original, SB ended up ruining it, but here he's actually helpful. WRITE MORE, PLEASE.

And yes, Patrick, I know fires can't be started underwater. :)

Squidward: *mutters* I hate everyone.

Me: Squid! What are you doing here?

Squidward: Why should I tell you?

Me: *sigh* Oh, Squid.
Anyway, great job! I'm not sure this SB is that pre-movie, but he's not as insufferable as he is in most post-movie episodes. And Squid is never disappointing.

Squidward: Of course not, I'm a genius!

Patrick: But don't genies live in a lamp?

Squidward, Me: *facepalm*
KaijuDirector007 chapter 1 . 4/10
If they'd gone with this ending, it would have steered the original episode away from the ScumBob episode territory and into the thin grey line between bad and good episodes. Nice work!
Jason2014 chapter 1 . 3/22
wow that was good enought to be a pre movie episode really made my day! and helped me relax even though i have school tommorow
SonicRules98 chapter 1 . 3/9
THANK YOU! If you keep this up, your version of SpongeBob can truly redeem himself! Please make an alternate end to Squid's Visit!
GiovanniGo chapter 1 . 3/5
How did Spongebob ruin Plankton's revenge? I fell asleep before it ended and that's the last thing I saw...a mime scared the SH*t out of Mr. krabs didn't he?
Warrior Cat Cody chapter 1 . 2/22
I know authors don't usually review their own story, but I just wanted to say this:

Murvine Taylor has a point, Jeremy. Wishing someone to die is kinda messed up. At best, just hope that they get fired until they write better episodes. Just saying.
tate310 chapter 1 . 2/3
Hey, can you do "Tunnel of Glove" next? Here's the plot.

SpongeBob apologized to Pearl about what happened on the ride. Pearl accepts his apology. Just then, Patrick arrives with the piece of machinery, telling them that he and ''Spongebob'' had a great time at Glove World. SpongeBob told him that that isn't him, it was piece of equipment from the ride. Patrick realizes his mistake and admits that he was looking for SpongeBob, but when the policeman told him that he couldn't enter, he had to find some other way to find his best friend in the whole sea.
Jaro Jet chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
Amazing job! I hope you continue with this. Only one thing- Rodeo Daze came after One Coarse Meal.
Murvine Taylor chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
While I do like One Coarse Meal (unlike most people) I think that this alternate ending is better than the original. I was laughing when the mime took away Mr. Krabs' money.

Now, JeremyX don't you think what you said about Casey Alexander, Zeus Cervas and Vincent Waller is harsh. You can hate their writing, but please realize that they are not evil. You would not want anyone to tell you to rot in Hell.
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