Reviews for One Coarse Meal: Alternate Ending
Finnjr63 chapter 1 . 9/21
You, my friend, should be an excellent writer for SpongeBob. Mr. Krabs actually gets what he deserves.

Keep up the good work. :)
Stan chapter 1 . 8/14
Neros Urameshi chapter 1 . 7/15
Now this is MUCH better! Take that, Krabs, you evil... crab!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28
Guys,Look, It's Ok For Suicide,Cause There Is No Blood.
natnat chapter 1 . 6/24
how can i get alternate ending without using a video from youtube? is it rare?
SUP BRO chapter 1 . 6/23
SUp bro # $!# ! ! !
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15
Excellent work dude. A much better ending than the original episode and you managed to keep everyone in character to boot.
New Universe Returns chapter 1 . 5/27
OK, I honestly didn't find out that you already make this until I was scrolling your profile page, and I like it.

The first time I found out about the alternate ending to "A Pal for Gary" is when I read the article of that episode in Spongebob Squarepants Wiki and the comments in it.
robs chapter 1 . 4/29
LOL AMAZING, how about an alternative ending to a squidward torture porn!
Jasmine Scarthing chapter 1 . 4/24
*claps enthusiastically* See, this ending actually makes SENSE. In the original, SB ended up ruining it, but here he's actually helpful. WRITE MORE, PLEASE.

And yes, Patrick, I know fires can't be started underwater. :)

Squidward: *mutters* I hate everyone.

Me: Squid! What are you doing here?

Squidward: Why should I tell you?

Me: *sigh* Oh, Squid.
Anyway, great job! I'm not sure this SB is that pre-movie, but he's not as insufferable as he is in most post-movie episodes. And Squid is never disappointing.

Squidward: Of course not, I'm a genius!

Patrick: But don't genies live in a lamp?

Squidward, Me: *facepalm*
KaijuDirector007 chapter 1 . 4/10
If they'd gone with this ending, it would have steered the original episode away from the ScumBob episode territory and into the thin grey line between bad and good episodes. Nice work!
Jason2014 chapter 1 . 3/22
wow that was good enought to be a pre movie episode really made my day! and helped me relax even though i have school tommorow
SonicRules98 chapter 1 . 3/9
THANK YOU! If you keep this up, your version of SpongeBob can truly redeem himself! Please make an alternate end to Squid's Visit!
GiovanniGo chapter 1 . 3/5
How did Spongebob ruin Plankton's revenge? I fell asleep before it ended and that's the last thing I saw...a mime scared the SH*t out of Mr. krabs didn't he?
Wildstar93 chapter 1 . 2/22
I know authors don't usually review their own story, but I just wanted to say this:

Murvine Taylor has a point, Jeremy. Wishing someone to die is kinda messed up. At best, just hope that they get fired until they write better episodes. Just saying.
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