|Reviews for One Coarse Meal: Alternate Ending|
| Finnjr63 chapter 1 . 9/21
You, my friend, should be an excellent writer for SpongeBob. Mr. Krabs actually gets what he deserves.
Keep up the good work. :)
| Stan chapter 1 . 8/14
| Neros Urameshi chapter 1 . 7/15
Now this is MUCH better! Take that, Krabs, you evil... crab!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28
Guys,Look, It's Ok For Suicide,Cause There Is No Blood.
| natnat chapter 1 . 6/24
how can i get alternate ending without using a video from youtube? is it rare?
| SUP BRO chapter 1 . 6/23
SUp bro # $!# ! ! !
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/15
Excellent work dude. A much better ending than the original episode and you managed to keep everyone in character to boot.
| New Universe Returns chapter 1 . 5/27
OK, I honestly didn't find out that you already make this until I was scrolling your profile page, and I like it.
The first time I found out about the alternate ending to "A Pal for Gary" is when I read the article of that episode in Spongebob Squarepants Wiki and the comments in it.
| robs chapter 1 . 4/29
LOL AMAZING, how about an alternative ending to a squidward torture porn!
| Jasmine Scarthing chapter 1 . 4/24
*claps enthusiastically* See, this ending actually makes SENSE. In the original, SB ended up ruining it, but here he's actually helpful. WRITE MORE, PLEASE.
And yes, Patrick, I know fires can't be started underwater. :)
Squidward: *mutters* I hate everyone.
Me: Squid! What are you doing here?
Squidward: Why should I tell you?
Me: *sigh* Oh, Squid.
Anyway, great job! I'm not sure this SB is that pre-movie, but he's not as insufferable as he is in most post-movie episodes. And Squid is never disappointing.
Squidward: Of course not, I'm a genius!
Patrick: But don't genies live in a lamp?
Squidward, Me: *facepalm*
| KaijuDirector007 chapter 1 . 4/10
If they'd gone with this ending, it would have steered the original episode away from the ScumBob episode territory and into the thin grey line between bad and good episodes. Nice work!
| Jason2014 chapter 1 . 3/22
wow that was good enought to be a pre movie episode really made my day! and helped me relax even though i have school tommorow
| SonicRules98 chapter 1 . 3/9
THANK YOU! If you keep this up, your version of SpongeBob can truly redeem himself! Please make an alternate end to Squid's Visit!
| GiovanniGo chapter 1 . 3/5
How did Spongebob ruin Plankton's revenge? I fell asleep before it ended and that's the last thing I saw...a mime scared the SH*t out of Mr. krabs didn't he?
| Wildstar93 chapter 1 . 2/22
I know authors don't usually review their own story, but I just wanted to say this:
Murvine Taylor has a point, Jeremy. Wishing someone to die is kinda messed up. At best, just hope that they get fired until they write better episodes. Just saying.