Reviews for Turn Me On
ChristianMom54 chapter 1 . 5/5/2016
Great suspense and twist. Thank you for sharing.
woodyandjordan4ever chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
Amazing story!
MyHanselskede0981 chapter 1 . 1/30/2015
I knew they were together! How could they not be? When I read that sentence with him saying that Lauren's wishful thinking, I knew it...Fabulous job!
rclaurel chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
Shit they knew each other, you had me going there
artri chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
Liked that you played it right to the end, good one.
mybookloveaffair chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
You almost go tme, but Edward slipped in his thoughts a couple times and called her "Bella" instead of "Isabella" and then he said he had a girlfriend, but he was still pursuing Bella and at first I thought "what an ass," but when she showed up, I guessed their relationship. It's a great story though. I like authorward haha.
dazzleglo chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
Loved it and how perfect that she is on the book that she inspired.
bananafox chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
great story.
Darcyfan14 chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
Well done. I love it.
Katy dazzledbythe Cullens chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Oh I loved this!
twisample14 chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
Good job - I think you accomplished your goal with this story! Bella was very mysterious. Have you considered continuing it?
Soni's Angel chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Hi Bexie25,

This was an awesome oneshot! To answer your question, yes you did succeed;) Who knows maybe you will consider adding more to this one day;P Thanks for sharing and donating to a wonderful cause.
skyhopper chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
You did catch me off guard. Lol but towards the end when they had calmed Down after the deed was done, the wheels in my head started spinning and I thought, is there more here than meets the eye...yup, there was! You succeeded! Lol
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
I loved it so yummy I guessed she was the girlfriend after the text and he said he had a girlfriend I remembered she was confused about getting tge invite but said yes I put 2 and 2 together thank you
BridieM chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
A surprising twist. As usual I totally enjoyed your writing style and skill. :D
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