Reviews for Bad Hair Day
LastOrder chapter 1 . 8/30/2016
Definitely the BEST. AUTHOR. EVERRRRR...
EndlessChains chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
A well done story. This was adorable. The reaction form Hang was quite something else and makes sense in a way since she really cares about her hair. It was endearing what Blake did for her and tried to cheer her up. The puns at the end was hilarious. Thank you. Keep up the good work
AnniBanani838 chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
More ideas eh? How bout Blake and Yang are fighting then One of them goes down and then its just like iwheriwerhiwahrefiealwhtoiu4wtheuohjxplznodieingdoh :P if you get what im saying :P
Ziirroh chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
Silly baes. This was wonderfully sweet. w
Tear of Light chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
That was cute. The things Blake does for her girlfriend. Lol.
AmberLilac0602 chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
williamwz3 chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
Oh my god the puns O.o
Still it was pretty interesting XD
Nice job on the story.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
InfinityTempest chapter 1 . 1/8/2014

Y'know, I think your brain, combined with TigerLilly's, combined with Knives', combined with Do Kun's, would create the ultimate Bumblebee Machine.

That... Did not sound normal. I don't... Sorry.

I was pleasantly surprised when Blake pulled some of her hair out; not a moment I was expecting, and it made the story all the better. cx Thank you for the read!
I'll Eat Yourself chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
More Bumblebee ideas, eh? Here's an idea: more action. You don't do much involving Blake and Yang in any actual action together. In fact, I think the only time you really did anything regarding them fighting together was that one where Weiss was told to fight on the sidelines as backup. Instead, try getting a little creative. Send them on a mission where they split into their respective couples. Maybe you can even take advantage of that and make it a double-romance thing, with one part of the story involving White Rose and the other part involving Bumblebee. You know, one of those stories that details what happens to both teams during the same time period.
If it helps, I am sure Yang has her more serious side somewhere, just as Weiss and Blake have their more fun-loving sides buried inside them. Why not have a point where Blake gets injured or something and Yang does everything she can to help her throughout the rest of the mission, even if it means carrying her through dangerous obstacles or briefly switching weapons with her so she can use her strength to swing them across a large gap with Blake's whip thing while Blake defends from rear attacks with Yang's gauntlets.
Now tell me, was I any help? ;)
Eldenfirefly chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
I think you should try writing a bit more bumble bee too! You are quite good at it! :) Even if I love your white rose stories the most. But some variety sometimes is nice! I got an idea for bumblebee! Have some guy hit on Yang and let's see how Blake reacts to that when someone tries to muscle in on her Yang right in front of her! lol
WretchedPanda chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Again a very great bumblebee story!

Keep it up!

inky.13 chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Two stories in a row? This just made my day! So much fluffiness :) Is it strange that I can actually imagine all this happening in cannon? Nice work!
Fireheart47 chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
2? O_O i cant so much fluff