Reviews for The Hobbit and The Snow Queen
MoralityDuality24 chapter 21 . 2/18
This was. I wanna Say good but I can't truly. It's technically proficient but it's just not bold. There's twenty 1 chapters of Elsa in Middle Earth and really she's just tacked on to the Hobit and Sucked into the story only slightly changing the eddies.

She could be removed and you'd have the canon story with little substantial. I mean the slight boost in Martial Mastery is nice but it's not nearly enough shock ot truly be different. And really it's a negative considering the Arendelle side is missing loads of growth. .

Elsa is a Winter Goddess. Even Accounting for Middle Earth SuperHumanity she casually works feats of mystical might that punks all challenges Gandalf Throwing Down with a Balrog for a week. And Mind fuckery. There was a lot of effort to put her at threat at points that didn't involve someone getting to knife fighting distance.

That really wasn't necesary and the attempt to create threat there only really created a deep and abiding frustration for me. I mean even with Elsa not learning to Thaw ice until after the End despite walking near so many wizards who should know to speak plainly after all of this. There were a lot of place they didn't give a damn about where she could have and should have by experience whip out the death storm. She also probably would have stumbled onto Olaf before the story started with the implied time skip. But that's excusable a an elenth hour power up.

Also the mind control magic. They were really dumb about thinking about that despite the writing being their on the wall, new familiarity with magic, Gandalf, and experiencing Mirkwood and the damn Dragon Spelling it out for her.

The Ring and the Arkenstone are bad juju. The change people. Get rid of them.

That's the worst part of it. It's the part that could and should have been the real claim to fame of this tale after that really epic boss fight ( the Elsa probably could have won on her own with demonstrated combat experience and lake to drown the thing in after icing it's wings).

Someone know that the Great asshole has mind rape artifacts and can Tell the Magic dudes to get rid of them while having enough go Juice to keep them from keeping it. It could have started the Quest to break Sauron a Generation early with all kinds of effects.

Also speeking of shouldn't the ring have been talking to elsa?

So yeah. This is way to late to change but good effort will read sequel.
Mr.E chapter 8 . 1/2/2016
Fantastic job, can't wait to see how Azog the Defiler makes a come back. Keep up the good work.
LilLinkGirl chapter 21 . 1/3/2016
Bravo! This was a good read :)
Vanessa Masters chapter 21 . 12/29/2015
Awww~ Bilbo, still in love with Elsa and missing her.
Vanessa Masters chapter 20 . 12/29/2015
Awwww~ Sad, but wonderful end.
Vanessa Masters chapter 19 . 12/29/2015
Well, that explains how Anna is talking to elsa.
Vanessa Masters chapter 18 . 12/29/2015
YAY! The Snow Giants to help, yipee!
Vanessa Masters chapter 17 . 12/29/2015
Oh no, Elsa, if you get anymore upset...WINTER!
Vanessa Masters chapter 16 . 12/29/2015
Oh Bilbo, lying to Elsa?

And so creative her asking 'What have you got in your pocket?'

The same words he said, almost, to Gollum.
Vanessa Masters chapter 15 . 12/29/2015
Oh, there comes the Arkenstone crazy talk.
Vanessa Masters chapter 14 . 12/29/2015
Epic battle, really. It was too perfect. Elsa against smaug, thou her ice spear to his heart was a clever idea, he was too hot for it.

And what a intriguing discussion, it really made Elsa think. And has also made her wary, and concerned for her dear friends. Bilbo most of all.

I can't wait to see how else this plays out.
Vanessa Masters chapter 13 . 12/29/2015
Oh good.

Elsa helped to save Kili, being a queen helped :D

And maybe, she realizes her responsibility to her people must overcome her fear. In order to protect those she loves, she must return.

A great chapter, love the healing scene. Elsa's learning of healing, should expand her magic, possibly.

Love how you write this, truely.
Vanessa Masters chapter 12 . 12/29/2015
So elsa reveals her royal heritage to bilbo, and now they arrive at the lake. Nicely done.

i love how it lead to all this.
Vanessa Masters chapter 11 . 12/29/2015
Aha! So, the Elves know of the star jewels.

Makes sense, I guess traveling to other worlds, to learn their knowledge would help make them what they are today. Also, traveling to another world would be appealing, if only to escape the corruption of Sauron.
Vanessa Masters chapter 10 . 12/29/2015
Poor Elsa, dark illussion And Sauren? O.o

And Bilbo, yeah, he's got it bad for her, almost confessed his love.

But great chapter, I can't stop reading it's too epic!
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