Reviews for Delayed Heritage
Guest chapter 7 . 3/27
Great story, but it's not believable how the NSY officers are reacting. The Earl's daughter, Lady Harriet Brandon, identified Dr. John Watson as her brother and the new Earl. It's ridiculous to think any of then would question it and demand proof, when it would be so incredibly easy to prove or disprove.

The only thing I enjoyed was Donovan getting a set down.
Guest chapter 9 . 3/21/2016
THIS WAS AMAZING! I felt like I was actually watching the show! Great writing and I'm glad you didn't turn this beautiful friendship into slash! Gotta go read your sequels!
BooksAreMedicine chapter 9 . 11/9/2015
John is a great brother.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 8 . 11/9/2015
Wow, this Harry is the worst version yet (not your writing but her morals etc)
BooksAreMedicine chapter 7 . 11/9/2015
I always enjoy seeing Donovan and Anderson getting a dressing down. I would love a story where John is still in the military when he meets Sherlock, perhaps Sherlock could be undercover for Mycroft like he was when he saved The Woman or when he was taking down Moriarty's network? A military John story would be cool to read if you had the desire, if not, all of your own ideas have been marvelous anyway
BooksAreMedicine chapter 6 . 11/9/2015
John's reveal to the cops was pretty funny, and totally in character too.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 5 . 11/9/2015
The banter with Sherlock and John was great, lol
BooksAreMedicine chapter 4 . 11/9/2015
Good plan to handle the family, really showcases John's smarts and strengths. Like the drama queen/debutante Harry, very entertaining
BooksAreMedicine chapter 3 . 11/9/2015
Fun twist with John storming out and Sherlock being polite
BooksAreMedicine chapter 2 . 11/9/2015
Insightful comparison about Mycroft and interference and Sherlock and mystery. I admire how you had Sherlock handle it, well done
BooksAreMedicine chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
Sherlock's reaction was so in character, bravo! Good explanation of why the rest of the family that loved John didn't look for him.
Mari Wollsch chapter 9 . 3/23/2015
lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxx
9foxgrl chapter 9 . 2/1/2015
good job
seanaface chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
Strangled by a bread machine! Lol! So full of good.
EvilDime chapter 9 . 10/1/2014
First time you really adressed Harry's drinking. Interesting.
Do you think she'll manage to get her life on some kind of track, now that John's actively helping/focing her? I'm not convinced, but I think at least she now has a chance.
- Dime
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