Reviews for Delayed Heritage
BooksAreMedicine chapter 9 . 11/9
John is a great brother.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 8 . 11/9
Wow, this Harry is the worst version yet (not your writing but her morals etc)
BooksAreMedicine chapter 7 . 11/9
I always enjoy seeing Donovan and Anderson getting a dressing down. I would love a story where John is still in the military when he meets Sherlock, perhaps Sherlock could be undercover for Mycroft like he was when he saved The Woman or when he was taking down Moriarty's network? A military John story would be cool to read if you had the desire, if not, all of your own ideas have been marvelous anyway
BooksAreMedicine chapter 6 . 11/9
John's reveal to the cops was pretty funny, and totally in character too.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 5 . 11/9
The banter with Sherlock and John was great, lol
BooksAreMedicine chapter 4 . 11/9
Good plan to handle the family, really showcases John's smarts and strengths. Like the drama queen/debutante Harry, very entertaining
BooksAreMedicine chapter 3 . 11/9
Fun twist with John storming out and Sherlock being polite
BooksAreMedicine chapter 2 . 11/9
Insightful comparison about Mycroft and interference and Sherlock and mystery. I admire how you had Sherlock handle it, well done
BooksAreMedicine chapter 1 . 11/9
Sherlock's reaction was so in character, bravo! Good explanation of why the rest of the family that loved John didn't look for him.
Mari Wollsch chapter 9 . 3/23
lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxx
9foxgrl chapter 9 . 2/1
good job
seanaface chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
Strangled by a bread machine! Lol! So full of good.
EvilDime chapter 9 . 10/1/2014
First time you really adressed Harry's drinking. Interesting.
Do you think she'll manage to get her life on some kind of track, now that John's actively helping/focing her? I'm not convinced, but I think at least she now has a chance.
- Dime
EvilDime chapter 3 . 9/30/2014
"legitimately ineligible" - what a mouthful! XD
- Dime
EvilDime chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
I laughed when I read the summary. Wonderful idea!
Wish they didn't have a photo, though. It would have been fun to see this dragged out a bit longer.
- Dime
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