Reviews for What Might've Been
IlluminatiGirl chapter 47 . 7/11
I loved this story! To be honest, when I was watching GG the first time, I wasn't too fond of Jess, but you really changed my mind, so thank you for that! ;D
(and of course, Luke & Lorelai was always a given)
IllusionsOfBliss chapter 47 . 3/26
Aww, great job with this story. Wish the show was more like this! Your characterizations were spot on and I loved the interactions/closer relationship you gave Jess and Lorelai. Nice job
Herdawness chapter 47 . 10/3/2015
A bit late to the party, but thoroughly enjoyed your alternative to season one.
Anon chapter 47 . 9/29/2015
Every word was beautiful. I love how your combined your story with canon. It was wonderful and thanks for sharing it with the world.
oywiththepoodles22 chapter 4 . 4/23/2015
This is amazing! I love the dialogue and the fact that Jess actually gets along with Lorelai! :) and the water bottle thing...clever addition to the story :)
CharmedOpal chapter 47 . 4/1/2015
Just need to say: Luke and Lorelai getting married out back of the Independence Inn? So perfect!

Ah! It's ended! Excuse me as I curl up in a corner and cry.

I looooved how you ended things. Jess and Rory both living in Boston is such a great idea. I would love to read a sequel, but it's all down to the inspiration from the writer. And seeing as you don't have any, I will sit here and sigh happily with a huge grin because I loved the ride this story took me on. Hehe.

*gives you a cookie* that's for being such a great writer, writing these amazing plots and not abandoning your stories!


Good job, Ultra! :)
CharmedOpal chapter 46 . 4/1/2015
Oh god! Jess was writing Rory's name? IN HIS NOTEBOOK? I had to cringe. He is suddenly a 12 year old girl.

I'm going to concur that the 'I love you' scene is much, much better with Jess in the place of Dean. No one can tell me otherwise. \o/

They even had a happy audience!

*blends in with the crowd and claps* WOOO! YEAHHH! MAKE BABIES! WOOOOHOOO!

I loved Luke whacking Jess upside the head because of the pregnant comment. That whole scene was just cute and family-like and adorable and cute. Did I say adorable? Well, it was cute.
satoz chapter 46 . 4/1/2015
...i love you
Thanks for the awesome ending!
satoz chapter 34 . 3/31/2015
QAQ I hate and love you
satoz chapter 32 . 3/31/2015

(finally got me to review xD)
MKM chapter 47 . 3/31/2015
Oh my goodness! I loved it! And the whole entire story! You have true talent. And FYI, if anyone writes that sequel, let me know. I'm just absolutely IN LOVE with this story plot
jordana60 chapter 47 . 3/31/2015
This was bittersweet. Bitter because it's the end of this amazing story and sweet because the epilogue was kind of perfect. It tied things up in a pretty little bow, yet left it wide open for us to think about what might be! Although I know they'll always end up together and I love that they're going to Boston together, I like the fact that they're not moving in together 're only 18 and I'll give them at least a year till they get to that point. I like that you skip 2 years and we get to see that they have made it through high schools I;m going to go to sleep now and dream about Lit living happily ever after!
ShadowXMoonlight chapter 47 . 3/31/2015
Suck a lovely story and ending of it.
KEMLEM81 chapter 47 . 3/31/2015
Thank you for this entertaining read, I've enjoyed the ride.
RHatch89 chapter 47 . 3/31/2015
awesome job :)
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