Please keep writing, this is brilliant!

This is brilliant! Keep it going!

The hero has degraded from a 16-year-old teenager into a 3-year-old imbecile, bravo.

Quite the cliffhanger to end on. Shame there doesn't appear to be a sequel anywhere I could find.

I know this is a million years old but I must mention that the Mako only seating 3 is absolutely silly, from a gameplay perspective and a lore one if true, it's not even half a squad. It ought to fit 10 and a driver.

This was really good! It's a shame no more was ever written. I can only assume something happened to the author, seeing how enthusiastic they were about this story and ones to come. I hope that's not true and they come back someday.

Wowwwww, you are a fucking piece of shit, no wonder there has never been a follow up, who the fuck wants to read anymore of this. Delete this trash and never write again if your are going to spew fucking horseshit like that.

I loved this story. I know it has been 10 years, but I just found it. Do you think you will ever come back and write a sequel to this story?

Welp, I certainly won't be reading the sequels. Having Ash turn on him. Get fucked you piece if shit.

Wonderful story! thank you for sharing.

Yo wtf man? That was a bullshit ending. After talking all the way thru about a sequel then still ending ir like thatwhen u cant be arsed. As it is u should change it to wip cause it sure is unfinished

Harry is useless. This another one of those Fics where the MC is irrelevant to the Story and brings no changes to the outcome. The character has the ability to counter mind control and has done it already in the Fic yet he doesn't act because of some stupid belief.

My biggest gripe with this story is that you make the rest of the magical world dumb enough to follow the inbred British magicals of all people.

It feels like there’s a chapter missing

I'm sorry, you lost me from the time of Harry being utterly stupid in the Citadel. Everything about that to this point outside of the general story events with Sovereign were totally forced and did not flow like the rest of the story. You went from Harry being intelligent and slightly paranoid to him just being a idiot.