Reviews for Fallen Souls |
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![]() ![]() a sad story but really heart touching. you should write more stories. |
![]() ![]() i really liked this story. |
![]() ![]() It is common sense to translate any foreign word you use in your stories. I have to stop every second and search the meaning of the word. From A this story is going to a C and dropping with each sentence. |
![]() ![]() This is a great story...I really love stories with a strong plot and wonderful details! Great job! But i can't find the nc-17 chappies...Where do you put them?-_- |
![]() ![]() ![]() just finished the whole story (again) OMG... i felt like i watched a whole new inuyasha... i wish i could read more stories like this thanks for this story... i love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! i recently just started watching inuyasha. im looking for fictions where there's an evil kagome who is hell bent on punishing inuyasha. i just stopped watching episode 45 and really pissed when inuyasha thought the line 'where are you, MY KIKYO'. im really really angry at him... kahome almost got her soul sucked out by kanna but still manages to help him and all he thinks about is kikyo? arrrgggghhhhh... i came across your fic im loving it so far... but i cant find the nc-17 chapters in your site. i hope your email is still active specially since the your fic was last 7 years ago. i know im a late viewer of the anime and late reader of your story. anyways if its not to much trouble, would it be possible for you to send me the direct site where i can find the nc-17 chapters of this story? hope you'll grant my request silver woman |
![]() ![]() You did a great job, this is one of the best stories I have found on here. Most are not well written and the plot too rushed. I think you ended it beautifully, with angst, and yet finally reaching that happy ending, where they no long have to fight anymore. I love it. Great job |
![]() ![]() I can only say that this is a masterpiece of literature. I loved every minute of it. The ending was great but it had a sad poignancy to it. I can only say good job! And I CAN SAY THIS TO THANK YOU SO MUCH! THE ONLY THING IDID NOT LIKE WAS THAT KAGOME HAD TO DIE TO BE FREE BUT IN THE END I THINK THE STORY WOULD NOT HAVE WORKED AS WELL SO THANK YOU FOR THIS GOOD WORK IT WAS THE FIRST TIME I HAVE CRIED OVER A STORY SINCE I READ BRIDGE TO TERABITHEA. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was um exciteing |
![]() ![]() ![]() BLODDY H#..damn ths fanfic alot of dark n definetely OCCNESS.. but still 1 of a kind fanfic..tnx gd 4 happy ending btw kaginu also their frenz especialy whn inu say: “I see you, Kagome,” “I see only you.” love tht part..gd thinking.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D Awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I'm rarely left at a complete loss for words, but you've managed it. I can't come up with words wonderful enough to describe this story, and I refuse to drag out a thesaurus! My chest is tight, and I've got a few tears in my eyes. I hope that adequately describes how your story has touched me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa! Nice work. Love the ending. I mean, I just hate sad endings. My baka of a friend sort of LIKES them! if it wasn't for the last chap. I'd probably be hating you right now... |
![]() ![]() i loved ur story its a really interesting one cant wait 2 find another one of ur stories! ow and my most favorute anime is inuyasa! |
![]() ![]() I know it's been a long time since you finished this fic, but it's also been a long (long) time since I've read any. So...I don't know if you're still reading these reviews but I hope you are, because I just spent an entire day reading this monster, and oh dear god. ! ! D I can't believe you carried it all the way to the end, and I am so impressed with the way you did it. I thought, at the end of the last chapter, that I knew how the epilogue was going to turn out-for the most part I did, but you surprised me with the "whole-cast" appearance. And I am so glad you did. I know you said in some other review responses that you thought it was sappy and cheesy and other such adjectives, but it wouldn't have been a WHOLE ending otherwise, at least not for me. That was the best part about it, I think-chaos erupting as usual all around the two of them...it couldn't have seemed right any other way. Congratulations on a well-finished story-the ENDING always seems to be the hardest part. And thank you for entertaining me all day! D |