|Reviews for Your Greatest Weapon|
| Dani chapter 1 . 2/5
Wow. Just...wow. I really wish the slow had explored Jane/Lucy for real. I mean, I actually like Mina/Grayson (despite the baggage) but why shouldn't Lucy get her shot? And honestly, I felt like sleeping with Jonathan was its own punishment, so I can't hold that against her. (Especially since it finally got Mina away from Jonathan once and for all.) I'm so mad Jane is dead!
Okay, with that out of the way, your story was so good. You brought the best out of both what was pre-existing with both characters and brought them to vivid life. The sex scene was, well, it's really hard to write a good one and you wrote a great one, so congrats. My only complaint is was too short but I know that when a story feels right to end, you must.
| Journeyswithin chapter 1 . 1/21
Wow...Just a big fat WOW. I love it 3
| A2463 chapter 1 . 1/20
Love it! Really love it!
| littledragonflyson chapter 1 . 1/18
I love your writing on general but that was really good. As the other reviewers have said the erotic empowerment was a nice touch. Not sure what will be happening on the show next season but now Lucy is a vamp I'm hoping for good things. Jayne, not convinced she won't be back but we will have to wait and see! Anyway, ramble. Looking forward to more of this ship if you ever get the time an the urge but I know how busy real life can be for us writers :)
| Pothead24 chapter 1 . 1/14
More please... I ship Lucy and Lady Jayne so hard please... write more stories you are so good at it.
| hersilentsentinel chapter 1 . 1/13
I really appreciated the totally feminist twist you put on this (b/c I know there are tons of fics like this that neglect the idea of empowerment/ self love) so thank you :)
| karamina88 chapter 1 . 1/13
Very well written I am very impressed and greatful you keep true to the characters.
| rmwlaf chapter 1 . 1/11
o.m.g this was PERFECT! more, please, and soon :-) so glad you're getting into this series / relationship!
| kswhateverspace chapter 1 . 1/11
That was absolutely fantastic! Wonderfully done! You have the characterization just right, it's like a missing scene from the show to be honest. I think a sequel would be quite interesting, following what happens to Lucy after 1x09. How Jayne will react. I'm so curious to see what would happen. Wonderful job! I simple threw you a thought of mine, feel no pressure whatsoever to follow up! Amazing fic, amazing. I can't sing the praises enough.
| geminigurl89 chapter 1 . 1/11
Usually I'm not into ships that aren't m/f, but I do think this pairing has potential. I'm glad I took the time to read your story because it was both well written and very hot!
| lilbit1016 chapter 1 . 1/10
Loved it :)
| in-the-sometime chapter 1 . 1/10
I love this ship and this was incredibly erotic. Beautiful work, wonderfully sensual and I love how very innocent Lucy is, I think it fits with her character quite nicely. Now let's hope that we get at least a small part of this with the show. Brava!
| ThePhantomPipster chapter 1 . 1/10
Wow! What a great story to continue that scene or to continue Lucy's "lessons", in general. I never would have thought to "ship" these two characters but your story has possibly changed my mind. I'm hoping for more interactions between these two as the show progresses. Excellent story! Thank you!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/10
Jayne had her cake and beating it, also. The lesson was the first step in hurting mina to strike back at alex. If, harker was seduced that would hurt muna. If, the friendship was crushed because she revealed lucy recealed her luv, again..mina would hurt and lose out. Only, thing left is mina's career and rep to destroy and im sure, jayne can do that with ease. So, getting lucy and sex isn't a bad outcome for her devious plans
| Ava1980 chapter 1 . 1/9
Wow! This was sooooo erotic! When I watch the next Dracula, I'll be praying for this scene! haha Good luck with that, right?! Great job! Thanks for writing!