Oh boy, I hope you’re still working on this story. I’m way to interested in seeing what happens next.

Please don't tell me this story is dead :(

one of the few fics that keeps me glued to the screen

Is this story going to continue or is it just dead?

And just when I think I got this story figured out…
A curveball from west hell… awesome

Not bad, Dude. Koodoes
Compellingly told story.
I wish the Marine.. i mean DevilDog. Uhm Houndoom, could be given the cuddles the deserve 10,000 times over.
Unconditional Love the US MarineDoom.
I see my Husband in-between the lines of this story.
InTheNameOfMyMarine Semper Fi.
-james-

ok, I knew who Mae and About were from the beginning, but I was expecting the Athena to have reformed them or something, not this. based on that I was kind of hoping to see Mae heal Grim and eventually break the ice, but, damn, did not expect that.
so, does Grim find out and join them, does he fight and kill em? I'm genuinely curious and can't wait to see the outcome

I fucking knew it! WWWWWRRRRRYYYY!
Oh my God, he nutted in a Pokémon! The same... oh my Jesus... shit just got really super real.

...excuse me for one moment.
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"I FUCKING KNEW IT!"
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I'm back, sorry about that. _'
I dont know if I mentioned it in previous comments but I suspected who they were for quite a while. To be proven right is AWESOME, and terrible! Poor Adam...

Curious, why is there no male pokemon ever mentioned in these? I'm pretty sure there are girls out there who fawn over pokemon as much as men.

I'm sorry to be one of those guys, re reading through this so I don't feel as bad, but do you think you'd ever continue sins of the father, or even Wrong Place. vaguely Remer an authors note in Wrong Place about it being done but don't remember. no matter, enjoying this story all the same

Mann.. no wonder i thought everything seemed to be going great, so great.
I confess, when i saw Anput continued with an accesory in her ear, i decided to make the crazy wager that the three were involved, but didn't realize little Tomo could be the zoroark up until the revelation, shows how much that fooled me XP
.. Then after recovering from my shock and denial, i realized how this is genious. Really gives answers, but give more questions to add to the great pile already formed: What do they want? Redemption? Unlikely.. at least for hare, and maybe anput. Torture? If so, in the middle of the mating time would be the perfect moment, so far. Then that leaves me..
.. They wanna use him, again. But this time, to topple over roman, and free the abused female pokemon. Noble.. yet, Grimm would be more than right to want to keep a very safe distance from anything they could do to him. Which the key cloning makes it impossible for him to defend himself. Maybe his only hope.. would be trying to seek help from the police or roman himself. And that only makes things more interesting...
Ahh, poir Grimm. It really is a shame that in your torment, there is such lore and mystery to be unveiled, mind games torn apart, truths surfacing.. let's see what will bust first. You, from out the line of law.. or, your sanity.
Till we meet again, Grimm.. and you too, author; pvt jim. I don't care about the slow updates, every single time i see a new chapter will be one of the greatest delights of my month! The hope of more chapters will always live on.. and i hope you feel happy writing these for us.
Enough now, then; Have a good day, and good luck out there.

It's good to see an update to this story! This chapter was great and my suspicions have been confirmed. It's frustrating that Grimm has to go through this again. Once he finds out he's going to be in a bad place. I look forward to seeing more in the future!

Yes, it has returned

Great chapter. I did not see that coming about Mae and yet the deception ties with Anput and Hare makes sense. Looking forword to the next chapter to see were it leads onward.

The amount of shock and happiness I felt when I picked up my phone just to see this story had an update, I would have cried if not the people around me.

Just really happy for this story to start getting updates again.

Well dam, that was unexpected. I don't really know what else to say except good writing in this chapter, and I eagerly await the next.