Reviews for The product of your faults
ItY'girl chapter 2 . 12/29/2016
oh, this is the perfect recipe for a bitter, young boy. Coupled with a snake whispering in his ear...
well honestly I was always amazed that Harry did not have more hate toward the dursleys in the book.
ItY'girl chapter 1 . 12/29/2016
uuu, this promisses to be an interesting story. Is the snake Nagini?
AsorenRM chapter 5 . 7/3/2015
So evily delightful! Plz update!
narutoxsasuke124 chapter 5 . 3/22/2015
update. I hate when writers end things like this
Anaelyssa chapter 5 . 5/7/2014
Hehe. Oh I'm loving Harry's attitude about the Dark Mark.
64teeth chapter 5 . 3/23/2014
I wonder if you'll explain how Harry got Nagini - as I suspect it is her, that snake? And what's the whole buisseness with Harry getting the Dark Mark?
64teeth chapter 4 . 3/23/2014
I wonder what f*cked up reasons your Pooter famile come up with for leaving Harry with Dursleys, and I can't wait cor them to get their due :-) I'm a little bit vindicative at the moment...
64teeth chapter 3 . 3/23/2014
Silent rebellion, and recognising his own power - I like it :-)
64teeth chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Nice start of a story :-)
nighttheraven chapter 5 . 3/21/2014
Damn, he really reminds me of young Tom Riddle. I hope he screams at Lily's betrayl or kills her after he tortures her day after day, finding out that she was the one who has caused all the pain. If only she didn't forget him... :D you're making me droll! More please!
I can just imagine what will happen when he discovers magic, please don't have him kill his relatives with a simple curse, torture is better! Come on, feed me! :D
Abeham chapter 5 . 3/15/2014
oohh.. i really like the darkness spreading in him. This chapter is a great improvement.
I could feel his fascination with the mark and the person who gave it to him. Brilliant work...
nighttheraven chapter 4 . 3/14/2014
Slytherin here you come! I wonder what you are going to name his brother? I like but wish there was longer chapters
Narcissistic Heart chapter 4 . 3/9/2014
Love the story so far and can't wait to see where it goes. It's a brilliant idea and you are pulling it off really well.
The only thing I could possibly suggest is breaking up the paragraphs, but you really don't need to listen to me.
Please update soon!
Abeham chapter 4 . 3/8/2014
Oh wao.. Really good concept and a really strong beginning. It is very good. An advice though, could u break the paragraphs into smaller a paragraph is too big, the reader might not want to go into it and just skim or not read at all. I tend to do that as well, but your story started so well that I had to read it.
I am eagerly waiting for more...
Linaceae chapter 4 . 2/27/2014
This story sure is intriguing. I can't wait to see the moment when Harry will be arriving at Hogwarts, it promises to be interesting :)

I love how you describe Harry's feelings, all his reasoning and how he changes from, as you said, a carefree to a calculate and cold nature.
I especially like the last part, where he receives the dark mark (which here is red, so does it makes it the 'red mark' ?) and the simple awe that he shows for it. If he worships Voldemort already, the light is in for some big troubles ;)

The only remark that I could do is that the paragraphs are too big and it's not really comfortable to read. Maybe you could work on the presentation ?
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