Reviews for Take Free
fiesa chapter 1 . 7/7/2015

This story is fantastic. Just a scene, just a few hundred words - and I think I've read it six or seven times now, on varying times of the day, and might continue for a few more days because it's amazing.

Your writing style, choice of words, these comments in parentheses, your descriptions and characterizations are beautiful. I love these two together, no matter how, and I think you've captured their characters well: they antagonize each other, but somehow complement each other, as well. I especially liked the back flash scene, but really, this entire drabble (story?) was beautiful.

Thank you so much for sharing this. It's not often that I find stories that really, really blow me away like this one has.

Oh, and: would it be possible for you to somehow get the link to the dj you were referring to in the A/N to me? I tried searching for it but came up with nothing...
Inugakki chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
*squirm* x3 cute
Mitsuchi chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
Fucking hell, that was pretty much perfect. I love their bullshit (-)/
Akane Izo chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
Awww yeah Kiyoshi why u so haawt like a goddamn sexy papa bear xD forgive me and my language. Hyuuga, y u so cute?
AspergianStoryteller chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Well written.