Reviews for A Father's Pride
Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
This was cute but I personally just hate it when people try to mix in "Japanese" words in the dialogue ("otousan" is not a word. There is a Japanese word that sounds a lot like it which can be written in Kanji). Throwing in Romanized Japanese words when everything else is in English always seems so fake.
Sorry about the rant, this just really frustrates me.
Breezybiatch chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
love it! - what the... i'm not allowed to say "love it" because apparently somebody else already had the exact same review!
Mizookie101 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
What an amazing daddy! He does care for trunks
TakenOff123456 chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
so cute!
Crystalzap chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
sweet, I'm glad Trunks got to see the pictures were kept at the end :)
gingerfurr chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Aww that was really sweet.
Clemen chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Sweet story and Vegeta is not OOC. Great job.
Jessi Tsuki chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Aww that's so sweet. n.n
MetalCloud chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
Oh my god, that was so cute! I'm not usually a big fan of cute, but I love Trunks and Vegeta's relationship, and this sums it up so well.
kitsuK8 chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
aw! omg soo kawaii!
Silver Lady7 chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
Oh, that's so like them. It's fluffy but not too mushy, and Vegeta is In Character. Just as I imagine him, caring but subtile.

Would you please allow me to translate your fic? I've got friends that would love it.

Be the answer yes or no, please let me know.
spanishbean chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
i loved it! so cute! keep it up!_
Selenity Jade chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Wow, this was REALLY nicely written! Very sweet father and son fic. Awesome job!
yugiL chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Amazin' fic~~!

Absoulty LUV the endin'~~

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Black Emerald Dawn chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
AW!
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