Reviews for Star Wars Altered Universe: Episode II
windhoundsolo chapter 11 . 8/11
Loved this story/interpretation, hands down! A bit too much on the lovely fluff, but it got its point across on their overall arc. If anything, it’s a more cautiously optimistic world than what we got.
ibry000 chapter 11 . 6/10
One of the finest stories I've ever read on this site!
iChaos chapter 1 . 6/5
A solid beginning to the story, even if I wouldn't necessarily expect marriage so soon if they aren't so rushed by circumstances. And what about Shmi?

Also, didn't the Naberries all live in Theed? Wasn't the whole point of staying at Varykino that it was already as clandestine a location as they are likely to find on Naboo to begin with?
enj412 chapter 11 . 6/3
This is an excellent story. Very well written. I enjoyed it tremendously.
DawnDayrider chapter 2 . 6/30/2017
You say that Ryoo and Pooja were removed form the canon but were not. Their scene was deleted but was in the AotC novelization.
TheWateringWizard chapter 11 . 5/13/2017
A very nice ending! Very romantic! I'm sure Obi-Wan will come to seek for Anakin's help in the RotS events of your next book due to something related to the future clone of Anakin.

If your sequel begins in 3-4 years (that's the time that passes between AotC and RotS I think) then the clone won't be too advanced yet. Between 9-12 years old. What if during the attack on Kamino that takes place during the comic books (I don't think it happens during Clone Wars), the Jedi or Republic clones discover the clones? Anyway Palpatine doesn't have enough genetic material to receive more than 2/3 Anakin clones. We know that Jango stayed on Kamino because they regularly needed more genetic material from the original. And with just one syringe of blood, they can't possibly do too much, I hope.
TheWateringWizard chapter 10 . 5/13/2017
Well that went exceptionally well! I'm glad for the change in Windu because we know that in canon, Windu never liked Anakin and his resentment and dislike of Ani wasn't liked at all by the Jedi. I'm not saying AT ALL that this is what caused the turn to the dark side but it helped. If you have a Master on the council who you know doesn't like you, the faster your loyalty will dwindle
TheWateringWizard chapter 9 . 5/13/2017
Arghhh that bastard Dooku and his underhand methods! He would've lost in a straight combat against Anakin! And I don't know what they plan on doing with Anakin's blood but it shouldn't be good... We know they probably can clone a Jedi. Example: Starkiller and the multiple clones of the Emperor
TheWateringWizard chapter 8 . 5/13/2017
Now how will the confrontation with Dooku go?
TheWateringWizard chapter 7 . 5/13/2017
Oh man I'm so glad you changed what they did when arriving at Geonosis! I was scared you would simply re-act canon but nope! What you cam up with is way more thought through and intelligent! I think it's mainly because anakin and padme are married and this brought peace to anakin!
TheWateringWizard chapter 6 . 5/12/2017
Wow that was VERY intuitive from Padme. Excellent deduction work! Now you just need to remember to tell Anakin.

Next up: Geonosis. How will it go? Will Padme fall off the ship? Will he get his arm cut off by Dooku? And what was this sample thing that Palpatine talked about? Does Sidious want a clone of Anakin?
TheWateringWizard chapter 5 . 5/12/2017
Well I'm glad Padme stopped Ani from slaughtering the Tuskens out of rage
Usernamesarebad chapter 11 . 3/21/2017
Very good story. I never was much for Romance, but I enjoyed it.
I also really liked your writing style. It was more descriptive, neater then almost every other fan writer. I look forward to reading the rest of your stories.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/9/2017
Pretty good stuff. I thought it was funny in a way how some things couldn't change in the universe from their decision made in love, but enough to keep the story truly interesting. I think in the case of Anakin Skywalker, his true potential wouldn't have been through destroying the sith, but rather by resisting him. To me, that was the will of the force. Great start so far and I intend to read episode III now!
SnowflakesandMozart chapter 10 . 6/3/2016
This is a satisfying AU. You deftly used canon as a starting point and then explored the divergences that resulted from Anakin and Padme's changed decision about marriage. I found the motivations that changed their decisions convincing and the resulting alterations in the following events logical. I can tell you invested a lot of time in crafting this story, and I enjoyed it very much. You wrote this so long ago that this tiny criticism hardly mTters, but you do sometimes mix up the spelling of homophones. Fortunately, the intended meaning is still clear. As far as the good stuff, I particularly like the touch that instead of being a Jedi openly and secretly married in your AU Anakin is openly married and secretly a Jedi. It's a great reversal of canon. I look forward to reading the sequels.
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