|Reviews for West of Here|
| Nathaniel19851911 chapter 19 . 11/30
bravo, dear lad! quite a good show!
| the epicslime chapter 19 . 11/30
So did Jamie end up having any children or is that for the sequel ?
| ddentler21 chapter 19 . 11/25
Extremely unique story, you've done a great job writing it.
| ddentler21 chapter 1 . 11/24
That was a fantastic first chapter
| Xlxxledgendz chapter 1 . 11/18
initially I had my doubts about this story due to the time distortion part, most stories with time travel/distortion suck so I was unsure but it's pretty good
| Bronze chapter 2 . 11/7
I gotta admit, it was a hellova show is right! Too bad Harry didn't put those three rounds in Sortymort's head. It would've done wonders for his looks! Now Harry just needs to raid a military base for a few cases of fragmentation grenades and napalm. Both will truly light up the Death Eaters lives. For a short at least. Now if he had the Queen's support as well he could something in the range of a thousand lb. laser guided bomb delivered to Malfoy Manner along with Riddle Manner. That'd make the word to the song It's Raining Men, quite true. Well, pieces anyways. As well as anything else in those houses.
| Bronze chapter 1 . 11/7
A good first chapter. The only thing I feel is off is that Fumblemort or if you want the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder, gave in much to easily. After all, he believes himself to be the moral compass of the magical world. Not to mention knowing what's best for every living witch and wizard in the world. He truly seems to believe that he knows everything and must be told everything by everyone. Only he is supposed to have secrets. It's also very likely that, at least in part, why the magical world of Britain is so far behind the muggle world. He and the other old farts are afraid of moving forward, of changing anything. With that type of thinking I can't see him caving in so fast. Unless he's simply going to betray Harry in the end. At this point in the story there's no telling what the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder has kept hidden form Harry about his family history and wealth.
| Bjalf chapter 13 . 11/4
The story seems to be going off the rails. The Locuta angle is weird and feels like filler. Harry is going from bad-ass to just ass. The humour is getting into crackfic territory.
It started off well with an interesting premise, but this is where I give up.
| MSgt SilverDollar and Snake chapter 19 . 10/23
| PSay chapter 19 . 10/16
This is a great ending to this story. I love the fact that Harry has his friends meet him in private to celebrate another victory and share stories of their lives. The fact that things happen all over the world to improve things for people all over is fantastic. I think Harry/Jaimie has more than fulfilled his obligation to the world. Thanks for a fun story. pms
| PSay chapter 18 . 10/15
Wow! Harry is so much stronger than anyone ever realized. I can see why he is afraid to do what he thinks Hermione should. I look forward to her solution to the problem. thanks for writing. pms
| PSay chapter 17 . 10/15
Thank goodness that remembered his timeturner. He was able to save the people and kill all the beasts. He is really afraid to commit to any woman. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms
| PSay chapter 16 . 10/15
This is amazing. At least Harry is back in the castle. I look forward to more of this story. pms
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/12
Good beginning, but the 'prankster Harry' is far too irritating to read to the end. You lay it on too thick there and turn a character into a caricature.
| old-crow chapter 19 . 10/11
As always, I had a wonderful time re-reading your fantastic story. While it ended differently than I might have expected, your way was excellent.
Thank you for sharing your creativity with us.
All the best,