Reviews for Things We Are Not to Do at Hogwarts (but we do them anyways) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! This story is hilarious! Please update soon! Maybe youcould do one where they try to ride the giant squid! Or something. Please update soon! -as always, Sky |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D Oh, I enjoyed this. Living troublemaking Weasley twins with two ears each are my favorite kinds of Weasley twins, and I snorted when they started talking about bees. :') Tips: A line break between the rule and the story would be nice, and it would also be nice if you italicized the rule. That would establish the separation between the header and the chapter. Oh, and it was a bit cliche to, well, end with a cliche. You could have just ended with "both boys were already plotting many adventures that involved Slytherins and butter knives", and that would have felt funnier and more original, I think. The last line was a bit unnecessary. Still, a lovely chapter overall! I hope you guys get around to updating soon! :) |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry, but content this absolutely wonderful is not permitted on Fanfiction. Keep writing or you will be reported. |
![]() ![]() Wow. This was so good, I read it to everyone I was near. Good job! |
![]() ![]() This is personally the best fanfic I have ever read. PLEASE update soon! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I love it, those two always make me smile, although I'm a little offended, being a Hufflepuff myself :-D Good job - I hope you'll update soon. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was funny, and it made me smile. I love it! The Weasley Twins never cease to make me grin. Nice job! |