Good story, bad review.

Toebang

Wow, I have to say, you have guts. You kill Dooku, and Cade. Derail Ventress and possibly Skywalker from their assigned. And just gave Palpy the finger. You don't see many stories that divert from one canon or another, soI just have to say that its really damn refreshing to see someone doing it.

I wish I could give you some constructive comentary, or suggestions. But I don't really have that many that I think would be worth mentioning :) Maybe a trip to Zeltros? Heard it's SW ansver to Las Vegas. Might give Ventress an oppertunety to blow some steam of, she needs to get laid.

Anyway! I hope to see more of this soon. But if not, it's been a nice ride so far :)

Cheers

Wow, love your story.

Wizards in space is one of my favourite HP crossover genres, and sadly, there are so few of those.

You know, they get to the Star Wars universe and become Jedi, often at the expense of their magical abilities. To the Stargate universe and become Ancients, probably because they were descended from them and somehow make the transformation back - while using their magic powers in the process. To the Star Trek universe and become officers-of-the-line in StarFleet, forgetting or just hiding the fact that they actually have magic.

I love seeing a story where they honestly do their wizardry in space as they din on Earth.

Besides which, the story's pretty good, too. Hope you update soon.

This was actually quite enjoyable, even if bald women aren't really my kink.

Awaiting more.

More. Immediately. This is awesome.

XD

More please :)

More...More...MOREEEE!

Fantastic!

Please update soon! This is one of the Best Hp sw crossovers Ive read.

This is a crossover I haven't seen before. I have to say that it seems very interesting (although to be honest, I attribute the appeal more to your excellent execution rather than any compatibility in the fandoms themselves).

It's very nice to see someone poking holes at Palpatine's plan somewhere. A plan so complex, with so many moving parts and spanning so long a time has to be terribly fragile. The only advantage to be had is secrecy and even that is debatable due to the ham handed way Palpatine pushes Anakin into his confidence despite everyone's misgivings. One has to wonder if it's wilful blindness or rank stupidity on the Jedi's part (Kenobi most of all) that let the situation degenerate into the inimitable clusterfuck splashed all over 3 very long, wordy, flashy films.

Here's cheering you on! I'd be willing to provide cover from rabid fanboys lacking common sense even, if any of those send flames your way.

The only thing that could possibly make this better is Harry moving in on Anakin's girl and actually making off with the woman, seriously. It's been this good so far.

The only thing I'd mark against this story is the fact that we don't really know how Harry got to where he is or what exactly he wants to do there (granted, not even he seems to know that last one). I'll admit that knowing that doesn't actually affect the story in any meaningful way - so much so that you've already woven something coherent and interesting without that information- but without some link to Harry's world, there is no real point for a crossover. Up until this point any character native to the galaxy far, far away could have done what Harry has done with the same information and access to the sites Harry has visited. His magic has just let you tell a story that would have needed, say, 100k words in half as many by letting you circumvent thorny situations in highly entertaining (and quick) ways.

I don't think the story NEEDS anything of the above, but something that would lend gravitas to Harry's presence there, anything, would make the plot feel a lot tighter where the crossover part is concerned.

Here's waiting for the next chapter!

Dooku was never kicked out. He was trained under Yoda himself and was quite the master.

Not bad at all, save for one thing-the fact that their conversation regarding the interrogators and them being the cause of the deaths of prisoners suddenly veering off into talk about Harry. That didn't make sense.

Great details. Humorous as always. And I find myself quite liking how you've handled Ventress' characterization as well.

Very nice. Palpatine is MAGNIFICENTLY handled. And Cad is oh-so-formidable.