Legitimately one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. It's not completed and ends on an unfortunate cliffhanger, but it's still very much worth the read

Update!

This was a great story, you cant leave it there, you should continue it

After seeing Mary's death in the prison, I felt a strange emptiness which is pretty strange for me. After seeing Edwards deceased friends at at the table whilst Anne sings, I burst into tears. Even years later it still brings me into tears, AC4: Black Flag was, and IS still an amazing game.

I just spent the last couple hours reading this and the only thing going through my brain is "No way...no way! This needs to be finished!" I know it's been almost 2 years since this has been updated but I hope you do come back and finish it. I thoroughly enjoyed your story and wished I could find for Kidday. Just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this Fic. Thank you.

Please do finish it!

Binge read the whole thing hope you finish it! well written and compelling story

It's a true shame that you haven't updated in a while. I always though that this story had the most potential out of the Kiddway fics out there. Have you given up on this story? If so, it is sad because I thought the way you portrayed the characters was pretty spot on. I encourage you to continue this if you can. I've seen so many stories with such potential become abandoned for whatever reason and I just don't want this to be one of them.

Oiiiiiiiiiii get off ya ass and update this kick ass story!

to many awkward conversactions about rape between mary and edward and great job of building up suspense between marys and edwards sex life but i think your stalling to much for example liked it when every seconf chapter sominthing newwould happin between mary and edward now its just them being attacked or her being pissed its ruining the story just have them fuck in like 3 chapters and end it

Honestly. The language and whole style kind of flips back and forth between modern and 18th century language and ideas. It throws the whole mood and style of the scene off a bit at times...

Added by the fact that the flashbacks are not helping really. It throws it off a bit. Breaks or not. It helps to have a bit of a reference at times.

Mary meeting kid doesn't sound right. I'm sure kid had been dead for a while by the time Mary was married. That was one reason why the James Kidd ruse worked so well for her.

You might want to go back through this and indicate flashbacks or the like, because it can get a bit confusing to read sometimes.

I've read a few of these now and yours is by far the best. Your attention to detail is amazing and I felt as though as I was right there with Mary and Edward as all these events transpired. I was definitely disappointed that Mary left without any type of explanation; especially after all her and Kenway have been through together. Keeping my fingers crossed that it all works out in future chapters. Those two are meant to be together.

You should really update it's a great story with a few spelling errors. But otherwise it's great. It's a good story line I'd love to keep reading