Utterly amazing writing. I love your storytelling. So much in fact, that I stopped caring about the erotic part half way through and just want you to write a book. Absolutely love it 3 3 3

Soooooo good! A really good oneshot!

Hey, fuck the negative comments.
You rock, and your story rocks.
Keep being awesome!

Thank you for this, original and delightful ;)

i need elsas image

That was hot. The beginning was a little sad, as interesting as that sounds, but I felt my heart break at knowing Anna was scared to the point of tears and Elsa still feels the guilt in her heart.

o_o *_* 0_0
holy...shit.
that was amazing.

Great! So hot! I hope you write a second chapter. It was really good! Congrats!

wow! I love that dominant Elsa! but I kinda wanna see Elsa suffer next time. lots of TORTURE!

, awful, I think the story in itself could be interesting, if the author was able to write properly

, the depictions of the characters were bland, the characters are undeveloped

Yawn, you call this a story I almost fell asleep reading it, short as it is.

I usually don't read smut, but this was pretty good and I actually love dominant Elsa.

Side note: I also found myself wondering at the end who said "I love you."

Impressive, even without taking the fact that it's your first fic into consideration.

mmm lovin that dom!elsa :) great work, keep it up