Reviews for Origins of the Fallen Emperor
KingBeasta chapter 12 . 13h
You should've made some of the fights more drawn out
ROBERT chapter 4 . 6/19
when in his new home now he siting on his throe now and seeing art of women with big size bods and others too, girls too, when he had more lovers now ,one is ion and others now each had sex with him and others times he took lords of ninjas too, when his desk had a super size glass look thing for him to seeing his foes and then the high rank ups of Konoha is now is it war with him , if it was me why not took out sound and others too, like the rice lord and he get the men 2 hot women both is black elf s and some time his had made a big size stone thing on the rice lands now, with it a big size cape and war helmet and war hammer and sword ,as well is women 3 of them all about it , too, it name SHAO KAHN into it now,
ROBERT chapter 8 . 4/12
when took out his ex Jon out his had the ninjas vest and death mask on the wall now of his office now and the men own dagger of the yellow flash now on the wall now, too, when his bed room is good and full of batter flags now and old armors too, ,when is the shake men own head now eyes be took out too, when his long red and black cap now on him now over the old ninjas vest too, he siting in his home now,
ROBERT chapter 6 . 4/12
if it me Robert k when took out my old foe and ex team cap i 1 kill him off then took off his ninjas vest and put on my own body and showing my muslces chest too and seeing her now took her with me and took her home now , when then made my new home black and red and the office of the lord had well had old art of kill off foes death masks on the walls and some others stuff like a ninjas vests too on the wall too, as well is swords and axes too, when then the desk is cool too,
ROBERT chapter 6 . 3/16
why not had old art of both Naruto and his new looking body now some old foes own death masks and old swords and axes on the wall now and old ranks too, when his office had his old ranks too and his desk is base on the war ram looking now , when on the wall is his wife s too, as for his wife now is happy too, if it was me ROBERT K, why took off his ex team cap old ninjas vest and put on the ram head looking now all fire balls and some foes own looking like it be on fire now,
Guest chapter 13 . 3/4
Omg you let kushina and naruko have a chance I’m done
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3
Man can u choose some else besides hinata for once man
Guest chapter 13 . 12/22/2021
I would have them be treated like Naruto was
ROBERT chapter 4 . 12/4/2021
when in his new home NARTUO had put on his desk some pics of his time with his wife and 2 kids and on the wall is old army stuff too and death masks too and heads of his foes some form the DC ream and others are of his own foes here now, when in bed he and his lover had sex and when bigger arms now and feeling it now was good too ,
ROBERT krause chapter 5 . 11/5/2021
why not let Naruto had kill off his ex team met and his get his ex team met women and she is now his sex slave and ion and when then his home is bigger size now , when his get the vests on the wall now, and his throe a big size gold and heads of his foes on the wall now, when Hinata his wife now and queen too, when she had her throe too like Naruto own too, and each others had living in slaves city a under part of the big home now ,
Mikeblade chapter 8 . 8/23/2021
you wrote naruto was stronger than granny mc drunk so him hitting kakashi in the head with a war hammer would not knock him out it would take his head clean off
Mikeblade chapter 4 . 8/23/2021
um if there was statue's they would not be of sasuke they would of the fire daimyo since he runs fire country and the leaf village not sasuke
jimmy.oz chapter 13 . 3/6/2021
Great story though would be interesting to see if any of the other realms ever tried to take his realm not that they would have the balls for that or maybe even kitanna needing his help or something.
robert krause chapter 3 . 2/7/2021
when took the money he had now and he then was out about now find a old monk cape and cap now and put them on now , Naruto had his own fast into it now , when Naruto had stop it some dinner inn and get to eating food too , when he saw the owner now he had her kill off now with his war ram hammer now and be into her office now find out she was a thief and hit woman too, when now kill off Naruto find money and gold and others stuff too, Naruto took them too, and some time he move out bund down the old dinner now, when get the art too , when Naruto had took over the wave now and into the home of lord now Naruto had his cub size office now full of art he took and keeping on the wall now and books too , when reading help too , when sleeping now with ten-ten and some others hot grils too , Naruto had time to think , he made ten-ten do a book for him on him and life too, so she was in her office and sleeping in the same bed room in the back of her office now,
robert krause chapter 11 . 12/13/2020
when before going on the fire lord Naruto SHAOKHAO had sit in his bed room open up a big box full of battles stuff like a 2 war daggers swords of the god of war ,some hit men guns and some old army racks one blue and one red ,when others stuff too, he get ownership of , when a big size long cape amore too, when he sit now seeing it now, when a pic book full of past lovers some with big bods 4 of them and others set too, when now, he put it back in his box now, lock it now, when siting in his air ship now, flying out now, sir this my way showing a old warrior who had his past wars and battles all over time and others reams , this not juke stuff sir but my way of helping out , you fan Robert Krause
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