Reviews for Drunk Reg Shoe
tosd chapter 5 . 2/15/2014
You've spelt some words wrong like millennia.
I liked your story. Please write more Death fic! You're a very good writer. It had a very strange plot twist.
Erbanana chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Your formatting's off!
SH retiring chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Which author's style is this based on?
anon chapter 3 . 1/23/2014
I think you need decorative line breaks. It's clumping into one huge text document. Your italics came through, so don't worry about that.

Your story is very funny. I like the mice. Pity you cut out the sex scenes, but last chapter you left in his pegger!
anon chapter 2 . 1/23/2014
I like them all in Biers together. I hope Susan doesn't end up kissing Slant!
anon chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
Nice story.
Slantaholic chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
Test. Why can't I use asterisks between scenes on FFN? *puzzled* Have to break it up into more chapters, I suppose.