Reviews for Link to Reality |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Story ended with some shots that are kinda confusing or maybe I missed some parts,like how did Ame "survived because she didn't take the knife out" when Sugou had a knife adtrr |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simplemente hermoso |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, what can I say... this story had me sitting on the edge of my seat the amount of times you teased us. Anyway considering this is completed im very happy I'm not one to write long in-depth reviews cause laziness but I'll vomit some words, I found this story quite enjoyable there were a few times I had to skim through a paragraph or 2 but I couldn't put the story down until I finished reading |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is great, I hope to read others as good, a greeting, see you, bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is what the Fairy Dance arc SHOULD have been. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Y'know, I didn't think anything could be worse than a rapey Sugou. Apparently, that isn't true. Great. It was going so well, too. God damn it, this had better change completely between now and the end. I do NOT want to have wasted my time reading a rework of the Fairy Dance arc only to have it be even WORSE than the original. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Somewhere in this chapter you wrote that yui was suddenly tall enough to wrap her arms round kiritos neck when she stands on her fingers. Just want to point out that you should change it towhen she stands on her toes.' It's quite confusing like this. Tiny mistakes like that aside, I love your story and your way of writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahhhhh im so sad this is ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() all I have to say is... if you have heart condition, don't read this fic in one go. The action is amazing and the story doesn't stop giving you a slap in the face every 1000 words or so. I'm so glad I read this fanfic. it seriously fixed fairy dance arc for me. All the original characters are very well made and their storylines are well thought out. There are these links in the story that no one would expect. It was a wonderful experience. Thanks for this amazing story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amusphere limitation for auto logout. darn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so who is Ame exactly ? since she knew Kikuoka |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah O_O Asuna best friend/Support is here yes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Asuna first party. yup Asuna shine in leading group. |