Reviews for It's a Losing Game
Guest chapter 3 . 4/20/2014
Good work!
TheJesusFreak777 chapter 3 . 4/20/2014
Love it. :) I think there are a few places where you could add some more details, but this is great
TheJesusFreak777 chapter 2 . 1/20/2014
This clears the first chapter up a lot... Kind of vague, can't wait to find out more! Can't wait for you to update!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
Oooh! This looks really interesting.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
The sentence structure makes it difficult to read. Nouns and verbs reversed where it takes the mind a moment or two with every phrase to figure out just what was said. "Hermione watched into his piercing eyes." What?
There is a very good idea base to this story and with a bit of work, it'll be very good. There's always the classic reading into a voice recorder then listening to the tale the next day. Kinda puts it out in front.
Ucellina chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
Oh, this looks like it's going to be interestiiiiiiing ) I sure hope there will be a love triangle!
RoaringLion51 chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
one question, what's the pairing?
TheJesusFreak777 chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
I'm a it confused by what's going on, but other this is cool!