|Reviews for Alpha|
| Guest chapter 28 . 5/4
I was reluctant to read this story as only two or three chapters have added since I began. When a story is good, I find it sol difficult to wait for updates. I am so glad I took a chance on your story. Its got a brave new worldish scify feel with great character. Development. I am loving it
| MuzlikeSam chapter 28 . 4/26
Wuhuu another chapter :) I kept hoping that you're not gonna stop writing. And I hope that it's still not the case. Can't wait for the next chapter, it's awesome story! :D Much wow
| Guest chapter 28 . 4/24
Wait. You can't finish there. We need to reunite them all. Are you doing another story about them. Please say you are.
| srcuz41 chapter 28 . 4/13
I am really enjoying this tale. I look forward to when you update again. thank you for sharing your talent with us.
| Charm7135 chapter 28 . 4/3
Your writing is really unique. Training people to be obedient like animals is crazy, but very interesting. Keep up the good work. I hope you update soon!
| Elynara chapter 28 . 3/16
I discovered this story last night when I was supposed to be sleeping and proceeded to read the first 19 chapters. All I could think about at uni today was coming home and being able to read the rest of the chapters. I cannot wait for this story to be updated! I absolutely need to know what happens next!
| Hope6968 chapter 28 . 3/14
Wow, congratulations on being nominated. Great background information, it really works with the story. Totally sells it. Thank you, Hope.
| Guest chapter 27 . 3/14
You come in contact with something in animal feeds. Fungal spores in hay , things like that. Check closely for mites. Ant bites too. Believe me I've been there...and I am in the medical field so I know what I am talking about. Change doctors if you think he or she can't identify the allergen.
Excellent story definitely one of my top faves!
| luckypenguinbuddy chapter 28 . 3/11
Thank you for the update on this gripping tale. I'm hooked so deep I'll never get enough no matter how often you update. Thank you for sharing story with all of us. Congrats on the nomination btw...very deserving. Happy writing. Holding my breath waiting to see what's happening to Jane.
| Saint73 chapter 28 . 3/11
Honey Thanks for the chapter, I appreciate your effort a lot.
| Awayfan chapter 28 . 3/10
God I just found this wonderful story & can't wait to read where they go next.
| Ravenworx chapter 28 . 3/10
Loved the story. Is there more coming? Wasn't to keen on idea at first, but you brought me into it. Now am hooked! Nice write! Thank you for sharing!
| rolly21 chapter 28 . 3/8
holy crap. I have just found this and read this over night. I'm totally in awe of your work and look forward to reading what comes next. Please update soon
| Harley Quinn Davidson chapter 28 . 3/8
Love the story and can not wait for more.
| Katysgirl chapter 28 . 3/7
There are words to describe my live for this story and your writing. You are so talented! I just read all of this in one go, absolutely hooked! Incredible story and so different. So very well written! Please continue