|Reviews for The Hufflepuff Chronicles Year of the Stone|
| Erimenthe chapter 15 . 8/17
I absolutely loved this one. Especially that final prank and the fact that Harry created it on his own. Such a wonderful change...now to go read more lol.
| ThunderClaw03 chapter 14 . 8/15
Ding- Dong the bastard is dead! Update soon
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/6
Hey there. Nice story over all, but your beta kind of fell down on the job. They don't seem to be able to tell the difference between "woman" and "women," which did get a bit irksome after a while.
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/11
Nice calm plot...loved it
| Tyler'sPrincess chapter 15 . 4/4
This is great! I love Harry and Susan. Amelia and Augusta are great characters too. Hannah's a sweetie too. I couldn't stop once I started reading. I'll be reading more of your stuff for sure.
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/27
Not sure if this is at all helpful, and feel free to ignore it, I really love your story so far, but the entrance to the hufflepuff common room can be accessed by tapping the barrel in the rhythm of 'helga hufflepuff' . Anyone who gets it wrong is doused in vinegar, which is kind of hilarious in my opinion! Love the story so far though! Just wanted to tell you that really :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/27
Really like this
| kare-bear-Karen chapter 14 . 2/3
You should really edit this chapter again but the plot and every other thing in your story is amazing.
| HH chapter 2 . 11/16/2016
'Surely now Aunt Petunia will love me.' You have no idea how much this sentence broke my heart
| kb18142 chapter 15 . 11/11/2016
This story was so good! I can't wait to see what happens next in year two! So glad to have discovered this series!
| The Frau chapter 15 . 11/4/2016
There is definitely 'something you should watch out for'...you seem to have a problem with vocabulary and proper word usage. One example...
...Amelia standing in the CROWED. The word you should have used is CROWD. (The red rooster crowed at sunrise...the superbowl always draws a large crowd.)
I suggest you not rely on spell check and invest in a good dictionary since spell check only does just that...checks spelling, not proper word usage.
Good story though, despite the vocabulary problem!
| MMax chapter 2 . 10/21/2016
Finished chapter 2 of this well written story. Please do not abandon it. Unfinished stories can be frustrating to readers. Take your time in completing it if you are busy.
| DemeRain chapter 15 . 10/6/2016
Thanks for sharing
| Tornhold chapter 1 . 10/6/2016
I'm enjoying your writing, I will probably continue to the sequels if it holds my interest. For the interim...
Susan go, should probably be Susan got.
When harry enters the platform you have a their when it should presumably be a there.
Harry and his two new friends apparently made the train excited, which I assume was meant to be exited at the end of the chapter.
That appears to be all that I noticed for typos and spelling errors.
| Saissa chapter 12 . 9/27/2016
Very nice chapter. The first fic I have read where Nicolas Flamel himself comes to investigate.