Reviews for Almost Free
retwin chapter 7 . 10/13/2014
Very nice story I like that Molly gave him 'what-for' and that his being kind freaked her out and had her checking him for narcotics. More soon please.
miraclesnjoy chapter 7 . 8/22/2014
I just found this story last night and I must say it's an instant favorite! You write Sherlock beautifully! True to character! I was as to reach the end of the last chapter because I didn't want to stop reading! Please update soon! Your an awesome writer!
Atlasina7 chapter 7 . 7/13/2014
This story is delightful. A nice blend of humor, romance and suspense. Some of the lines are just classic-such as Mrs. H. telling Sherlock he is not nice. I'm looking forward to future chapters.
legolover chapter 7 . 3/5/2014
This...this like made me entire day. I was so angry when I was at work and couldn't finish the rest if the way because you are very talented. This is fantastic! I think everyone is n character while still showing the growth that only fanfiction can seem to bring. I like the playful relationship between Sherlock and Molly. It suits them. Happy writing!
IslandGem chapter 7 . 2/27/2014
Lovin' this fic. The ref to Magic Mike in Chap 1 was funny too. As is the dialogue. I actually like the fact that the sexing times are not fully explained, etc. It leaves that up to our imaginations of Sherlolly and that is all good in my book.
MoffatJanine chapter 5 . 2/26/2014
Two only obvious problems I have if Sherlock did indeed sleep with Janine was that he used her, of course, and that he called somebody - he had intimate relations with - a whore. Now I've pissed off a lot of ex-boyfriends in my time but never have they had the nerve to call me out with a misogynist slur. What Sherlock did was disgusting and what he added onto it was profoundly disrespectful. I can rule that out due to Moffat's horrendous writing abilities but I don't because it was still Sherlock who said it.

Now having said that, your story ruling that in canon Sherlock did sleep with Janine and did NOT call her a whore, I'll accept that. Girlfriend was practically jumping all over the guy to have sex with her. It's not unrealistic, is what I'm trying to say.
calicar chapter 5 . 2/26/2014
Two only obvious problems I have if Sherlock did indeed sleep with Janine was that he used her, of course, and that he called somebody - he had intimate relations with - a whore. Now I’ve pissed off a lot of ex-boyfriends in my time but never have they had the nerve to call me out with a misogynist slur. At least not to my face. What Sherlock did was disgusting and what he added onto it was profoundly disrespectful. I can rule that out due to Moffat’s horrendous writing abilities but I don’t because it was still Sherlock who said it.

Now having said that, your story ruling that in canon Sherlock did sleep with Janine and did NOT call her a whore, I’ll accept that. Girlfriend was practically jumping all over the guy to have sex with her. It’s not unrealistic, is what I’m trying to say. And I loved Janine. She was cool and certainly didn't need to act so cordial with him at the hospital but she was. Her revenge on him was a petty but fair. She got her cake and ate it too.

As I said in my last review I'm really enjoying where you're taking Molly and Sherlock's relationship and how determined Sherlock is by staying with Molly instead of pushing her away when she gets attacked. I love the writing and characterization. And I really, really can't wait for more.
wynnleaf chapter 5 . 2/26/2014
Fun story and I'm enjoying it. I have to suspend my belief regarding your interpretation of Sherlock's relationship with Janine. Actually, a Moffat and Gattiss interview confirmed that nothing happened between them and therefore her "just once would have been nice" and Sherlock's "I was saving it for marriage" was referring to that.
Mara chapter 7 . 2/25/2014
Ahem, that bottom can't have been too sore.

Could you do a flashback where Sherlock tells John what happened? I would love to see Johns's (and Mary's) reaction. You had him text John at the end of last chapter so John knows, doesn't he? I cannot imagine that Sherlock would not tell him (both to boast and out of concern for what happened).
Mara chapter 6 . 2/25/2014
I do prefer sensual scenes to sex scenes at any time. Quite a lot of sex scenes are pretty boring and present a sex scene for the sake of a sex scene.

I like it that you include John. A lot of Sherlolly authors simply disregard him which is completely unrealistic if you look at the importance of John in Sherlock's life and viceversa.

Oh, speaking about John or rather John's wife, Sherlock would not have to look that far for a hitter... ;-)
Renaissancebooklover108 chapter 7 . 2/25/2014
lol nicely done xD :)
Gypsy Rose2014 chapter 7 . 2/25/2014
Another amazing chapter! I love your writing style. Keep it up, wilya?!
calicar chapter 7 . 2/25/2014
Very, very sweet. Well as sweet as Sherlock can be anyways. I hope he finds whoever tried to kidnap Molly soon. Please continue!
louvreangel chapter 7 . 2/25/2014
Thoughtful Sherlock is always sooo adorable *heart*
Mara chapter 5 . 2/25/2014
Quite some date and - ahem - aftermath of the date...

To your reasoning above: I can understand it though I don't agree with it. But I was a bit astonished about the fact that Sherlock should have "normal porn preferences" according to Charles Augustus Magnussen. I had seen him more as asexual. He was definitely interested in Irene Adler and I do think there was a sexual undercurrent there - perhaps his sex drive was awoken then. I suppose it could have just been the fact that Moffat and Gattis did not want to "emasculate" Sherlock as every man in this world seems to watch porn (heya stereotype) if he is supposed to be a man, but I hope they did not stoop to that level. Who knows? I certainly don't.
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