|Reviews for The Grimm Knight|
| Yagonator chapter 8 . 8/27
One of my favorite RWBY fanfics. PLEASE update soon! Everything is coming to a head! HUGE CLIFFHANGER! Fantastic plot and character interactions. The way you give each character some focus time to explain their situation and thoughts is great, and gives just the right amount of insight without detracting from the other characters stories.
Keep it up and please update soon.
| Zack chapter 1 . 7/17
I love the story and its elements please update more please
| the things that define you chapter 8 . 6/13
I like how the story is going and you intertwining all the characters together. Not really excited for them to go to beacon. The cannon is to predictable and I think you could write a much better story doing something origional. Also seeing/learning more about this split personality would be cool. Overall though a great story.
| BleedItAndWeep chapter 8 . 6/6
Awesome. Awesome awesome awesome.
I gotta say, this was good. Really, really good. Updates would be amazing. Like warm hugs on a winter day! Please.
| BleedItAndWeep chapter 7 . 6/6
THE NEXT CHAPTER IS THE 'LAST' CHAPTER
THIS CONCERNS US, MORTAL. YOU WILL UPDATE. THAT IS CERTAINTY
| BleedItAndWeep chapter 6 . 6/6
MORTAL. I GUESS THEE COULD SAY JAUNE WAS... WHIPPED! *UPROARIOUS, BELLOWING LAUGHTER BEFTTING A VILLAIN* YOU ENTERTAIN ME
CONTINUE, AND BE REWARDED
(but on a more serious note, I do like how you're putting in genuine effort to make a story /different/ than canon. we truly don't have enough of those)
| BleedItAndWeep chapter 5 . 6/6
YOUR ABILITY TO REDIFINE BACKGROUNDS AND CREATE INTERESTING CHARACTER DYNAMICS IS GIVING MY ETERNAL CONVICTION A RAGING URGE TO CONTINUE READING
STOP WRITING THIS STORY AND YOU WILL DIE
| BleedItAndWeep chapter 3 . 6/6
MY EYES ARE BEGINNING TO BLEED BECAUSE I AM NOT BLINKING
YOUR QUALITY OF EXISTENCE CONTINUES TO INTRIGUE ME, MORTAL
| BleedItAndWeep chapter 2 . 6/6
YOUR EXISTENCE CONTINUES TO INTRIGUE ME MORTAL
KEEP DO THAT
| BleedItAndWeep chapter 1 . 6/6
YOU HAVE MY ATTENTION MORTAL
I WILL BE WATCHING YOUR PROGRESS
| Mack chapter 1 . 5/21
Story is the best and I would really like to read more please. I would like to know what happened next so please release the next chapter
| Benthino chapter 8 . 5/9
Awesome story, I hope to see more in the future of our dear knight. Best wishes my friend!
| Howard blake chapter 8 . 5/9
Woot woot! Struck gold with this story! Finally a badass Jaune that can go toe to toe with someone like Adam Taurus. The likely harem is also fun factor. Eagerly awaiting the next update!
| warrof chapter 8 . 5/8
NOOOO! no more chapters atm...
So i gotta ask, Are you planning a Harem or just having a lot of hot girls after the ingorant guy?
Also, I Ruby in on this or does she only view Jaune as her brother?
Looking forward to future chapters!
| gammabeta99 chapter 8 . 5/3
love the story, its fantastic, you should update soon