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OMG this story is so awesome! Keep writing!

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*ahem* Anyway, I like this this, the plot development is excellent, the story is very creative with plenty of mystery and drama to keep it interesting. Keep going!

Yay! You finally got another chapter up! Ugh...tests and teachers...why can't they figure out that we have a LIFE other than school? *sighs...*I will NVER get teachers, anyways... I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I CAN'T BEGIN TO THANK-YOU ENOUGH! SO THANK YOU! Thank you for writing an awesome chapter for us all to read! I love this story, and thank you so MUCH for the plushies! To bad I like three charachters and I could never choose between them! Sonic, Shadow and Knuckles ROCK! Yay, try and get a new chapter up soon!

Yay! You finally got another chapter up! Ugh...tests and teachers...why can't they figure out that we have a LIFE other than school? *sighs...*I will NVER get teachers, anyways... I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I CAN'T BEGIN TO THANK-YOU ENOUGH! SO THANK YOU! Thank you for writing an awesome chapter for us all to read! I love this story, and thank you so MUCH for the plushies! To bad I like three charachters and I could never choose between them! Sonic, Shadow and Knuckles ROCK! Yay, try and get a new chapter up soon!

Yay! You finally got another chapter up! Ugh...tests and teachers...why can't they figure out that we have a LIFE other than school? *sighs...*I will NVER get teachers, anyways... I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I CAN'T BEGIN TO THANK-YOU ENOUGH! SO THANK YOU! Thank you for writing an awesome chapter for us all to read! I love this story, and thank you so MUCH for the plushies! To bad I like three charachters and I could never choose between them! Sonic, Shadow and Knuckles ROCK! Yay, try and get a new chapter up soon!

That was one of the best chapters yet! hurry and get some more up! This is still one of the best stories on ! I know that knuckles isnt the one to call Sonic blue hedgehog though I hear Shadow is... and he has red in his quills too!.

Ja ne!

Keep up the good work!

Tsunami Wave

Interesting idea here! I like the story and I have yet to fins anything bad about it really! I like the flashback and how you made Tails age reflect his personality.

Shadow! The mystery person is Shadow! The red hair is from the top of his quills, he's the only one to ever call Sonic a blue hedgehog and Sonic knows him well...am i right?

I like it.

In fact I like it a rather lot.

Very nice! Looking forward to more chapters. Ever noticed that really hyper moods are great for reviewing in? Or maybe that's just me...

Well, good story, I like. And don't worry, character developement is a GOOD THING.

Keep writing!

Know what? This is great! Absolutely cannot wait for more. Strange to cut the chapter in the middle of a flashback, but okay. Er, "Robot" can be "robot" here, by the way. I am making this an overall ***** even if it doesn't average out that way, because I really do like it, and if I used halves both "Interest" and "Creativity" would be ****1/2.

Plot: ****

Mechanics: *****

Interest: ****

Creatvity: ****

Overall: *****

! You ahfta write more! your awesome!

That was so... COOL!~! _ Keep up the good work! Ja ne!

This is an excellent first chapter. It leaves me thirsting for more, though. Don't wait too long to write the next chapter. I will be waiting.

thats a cool part 1 do part 2

All right cool story.

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