|Reviews for The One With|
| TwilighterSam1989 chapter 7 . 3/31
I really understand why you would rather be born in USA because I have that too. And because youre a dutchie this story rocks more and more. And I think your english is great! But that is because Im dutch too I think lol! Meid je doet het geweldig! En ik zal elk hoofdstuk volgen! Keep up the good work!
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/26
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/25
change the school to a high school because that is what this story seems to revolve around not an university. And even so she is too old to be in a her third year so bring that down a few year but otherwise it seems ok.
| frostedglaze chapter 6 . 3/25
I truly hope Bella reports Tanya and Carmen.
| nour.kiwan.92 chapter 5 . 2/24
Nice story! I really like those E and B!
And even though I just found your story... I can't wait for next chap...
btw I like how you play with the characters, their families, their relations, their past...
You should definitely write more in EPOV... if you can
| michangelina chapter 5 . 2/22
I liked it!
| Shirley'sway chapter 1 . 2/20
Very nice story, loved it.
| frostedglaze chapter 2 . 1/26
Edward is an ass. Why the hell is he with Tanya? Or is he only thinking with his celery stick? And how dare he call Bella boring!
| Straight.to.the.Point chapter 4 . 1/25
I, personally, like the mystery you give Edward. It makes me want even more than I already do ( which is a hella lot). I thought it was funny how you made emmet like jasper and had referenced him. I am really hoping there will be an ex confrontation : ) Please update soon!
| TwilighterSam1989 chapter 4 . 1/25
I am too!
| TwilighterSam1989 chapter 2 . 1/25
I liked it and youre right about dutch being Boring i prefer english too. Maja we zijn nou eenmaal Hollanders haha
| TwilighterSam1989 chapter 1 . 1/25
Im already like you because your from
Holland and you write an english fanfic with Edward And bella. In het Nederlands meid ga vooral door! Keep up the good work
| Straight.to.the.Point chapter 3 . 1/18
ohh damn. . .this story needs many updates : ) -clicks follow/ favorite button-
| booboonbunny chapter 2 . 1/15
Please keep writing. It's a fun story I can't wait to see what unfolds.