Reviews for A Formal Arrangement
ElsaMaureenElphaba chapter 19 . 14h
Occasionally every so often I go back to read this excellent story. Is that it's so great! No matter what story I have to wait for its continuation, but I know it will be worth it.
A.Gronow chapter 20 . 6/19
It's fantastic so far, please, please update... or at least let them err... consummate. All this teasing and tension is enough to drive one wild.
A.Gronow chapter 5 . 6/18
Seriously, a grey Andalusian?! Are you trying to kill me with jealousy? They're only my favourite breed and whilst i am partial to the darker colourings, i cannot help but drool over the image of such a beautiful creature.
Oh and the story is great so far too lol.
Guest chapter 20 . 6/5
Have you ever thought about writing a frozen version of Norse mythology?
Elsaice giant
Guest chapter 20 . 5/25
Хей, автор, привет из России! Я читаю ваш фанфик уже год, но знаю, что есть люди, которые живут в ожидании новой главы уже несколько лет. Это большой успех! Но все же, когда продолжение? Ваши герои мне полюбились, я чуть ли не живу этим фанфиком! Не оставляйте его, продолжайте писать!
thorneux chapter 20 . 5/8
Finished rereading it again. Man, I missed this. Hope you're doing fine btw :)
Guest chapter 18 . 4/29
Really? Who wants their lover to have got all their techniques from an erotic novel, that is as bad as porn. I shudder to think. Shame you didn't just let them discover naturally, would have been far cuter, if you hadn't kept characterising Elsa as a sex offender.
Guest chapter 20 . 4/20
This might be because you didn't have a beta but this chapter had me questioning Anna's way of speaking. Her character is very blunt and informal. I think the way u wrote the dialogue at the beginning is different they she would normally speak. Other than that, I believe you've captured Anna and Elsas personality very well. Please update soon.
Guest chapter 20 . 4/19
Please update? This is my all time favorite story and it makes me sad it hasn't been updated. I hope all is well with you!
Guest chapter 8 . 4/14
Really quite odd :/. You write 500 words on the most innocuous of topics, meandering on in vague waffle and extreme misunderstandings. The basic premise is good, but why is Anna a slut? Why is Elsa a sex offender? Why do you find gloves so errotic when the rest of us don't? Questions, questions, questions.

And that whole business with Gerda - made no sense. It's a hair ribbon. The chances of a girl letting down a fancy but uptight hairdo when alone are high, it's normal not sexual.
Guest chapter 20 . 4/13
Amazing! So detailed and I kkow it must be time consuming.
Guest chapter 20 . 3/21
What a lovely couple you've portrayed!
thisisanusername chapter 20 . 3/17
i hope you update soon!
Atta2 chapter 20 . 3/8
ah! i love your fanfic so much :)
Can't wait to read more
Alex is my name chapter 1 . 3/5
Mate I actually just need you to update so I know that you're okay...or alive...
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