|Reviews for One Piece: Straw Hat Crew Shuffled REBOOTED!|
| Arekanderu chapter 1 . 1/17
Well...seems weird since basically you changed the Nico Robin character to the point where she is essentially not Nico Robin but hye. If you like it more power to you
| scatteredPhilosopher chapter 2 . 1/16
Shell Island is over and done with! Nami with Zoro's personality was kind of unexpected, but it'll be interesting to see how that plays out. I love how you included that detail about Helmeppo's room, and Robin's mini-profile on herself! Who knew she was a gymnast? XD
A "mysterious man", huh? It could be any Straw Hat, but we know for a FACT that it is a man with Nami's personality. Hehe. If it's Sanji I will laugh so hard.
I loved it!
| shinjojin chapter 2 . 1/16
My god, I can't believe that I didn't notice that you already made a chapter 2! Lol
Anyways, I read it and there are a couple of things that I want to point out. First off, you misspelled Tekkai and second, Geppo is a technique where the user actually jump off the air itself, allowing them to stay in the air for much longer than usual as well as to cross great distances without ever touching the ground, or set themselves up for swift, aerial attacks. The "Razor sharp wind" technique you had Robin use is actually a "Tobu Shigan" technique.
As for the rest of the chapter, it was awesome!
| shinjojin chapter 1 . 1/16
Looking impressive so far! I'm really liking the changes!
As for making Robin a rokushiki user, it's all up to you but in my opinion, I say GO FOR IT!
| scatteredPhilosopher chapter 1 . 1/15
I... I think this is brilliant. My only thought is that it may be difficult to incorporate Luffy's punching and kicking fighting style with Robin's ranged style, considering Robin relies on her fruit and in a way Luffy just uses it to make his attacks stronger. It would definitely give Robin a boost in that sense to have her know the 6 Rokushiki styles. I didn't quite say that how I wanted to, but I hope I got my point/idea across. u
On the actual story itself, my only advice is to stick to canon but not for every word, hopefully. Like when Coby is asked by Alvida who is the most beautiful pirate on the sea and he answers Robin- things are different enough to be unique, but it's still recognizable as One Piece. (Speaking of that moment, it was so great.)
I think I'm tired and rambling, soo... yeah. I'm looking forward to chapter two! (P.S. Robin with Luffy's personality was a stroke of genius, and I am definitely looking forward to seeing what you have for the rest of the crew!)(Zoro with Chopper's, Zoro with Chopper's, Zoro with Chopper's! [actually seeing Luffy with Robin's would be hilarious and yeah I DEFINITELY need to stop])