Reviews for Before and After
Guest chapter 7 . 2/6/2014
Ever heard the son Don't mess with Me? I was thinking of that while reading this chapter!
Tigersfury chapter 7 . 2/6/2014
Mal: "I never said I wouldn't stick it somewhere else!" I was like wow
Hikari Ino chapter 7 . 2/6/2014
so now the others have forgotten Mal was Jake of course except for Svetlana
Jaynezstar chapter 6 . 2/3/2014
Awe poor Mike :''( This is getting REALLY intersting now tho, The Malevolent One is permanatly in control, the alters are in the brain and oh god they are in prison.

I shall be eagerly awaiting an update ;)
Tigersfury chapter 6 . 2/3/2014
YES! Duncan and Mal time!
shinxshinx1595 chapter 6 . 2/3/2014
Poor Mike. Great chapter though.
Guest chapter 6 . 2/3/2014
Best Chapter Ever!
Guest chapter 6 . 2/3/2014
You just made my Monday a thousand times better
Major Monty the Straw Vulcan chapter 6 . 2/3/2014
Great job. I love this story. Keep it up please!
Hikari Ino chapter 6 . 2/3/2014
So Mal's got his name and is now in juvie everything is getting good
Mike184 chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Okay I have been waiting for two days for chapter 6 to release. Hurry! I'm about to explode!
Tigersfury chapter 5 . 1/31/2014
*LE GASP*
Crystalmoon39 chapter 5 . 1/30/2014
Oh Mal... Mike life get better right? I guess the best comparison for Mal/Jake would be polluted water. He was once Mike guardian angel, but the fall was just too hard for him.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/30/2014
Great chapter!
shinxshinx1595 chapter 5 . 1/30/2014
Awesome chapter!
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