Reviews for Before and After
Hikari Ino chapter 5 . 1/29/2014
(hears in the Hall of the mountain king)

Ladies and Gentleman I give you the great Malevolent one...Mal!
Mike134 chapter 5 . 1/29/2014
Things are really heating up now! Jake is gone and the monster we all know and love has been born. Juvie is next.
superboltstrike chapter 4 . 1/27/2014
I've been following your stories a little before Zoke Week and I have to say...you've got a real talent. Everytime I get a notice that you published a new chapter, a huge smile appears on my face. As for the story, keep it up :)! I was really hoping Mal was going to kill them but way to add on the suspense.
Tigersfury chapter 4 . 1/27/2014
love this so much!
Mal Is My King chapter 4 . 1/27/2014
Dude! I'm CRYING! AGAIN! Your murdering me with sadness and suspence! Please update soon or I may die!
Hikari Ino chapter 4 . 1/27/2014
oh boy Jake is finally becoming Mal and its going to get scary
shinxshinx1595 chapter 4 . 1/27/2014
Nice chapter!
plowplum chapter 3 . 1/25/2014
So we finally get a glimpse of Mal's past that was slightly hinted at in the previous story Daddy's characters and I have to say it was more messed up than I thought. Apparently Mike had a mother whom was not quite right in the head and an abusive father who would disappear from time to time. Mike used to have 2 younger siblings, a brother and sister whom his mom apparently killed and had Mike bury his brother's body in the backyard with Mike being traumatized enough to create a persona based on his brother Jacob to cope with it. Interestingly enough, Mal really did think he was Mike's dead brother come back to life to protect him and took that job seriously. In a way, it makes Mal's character a lot more tragic when you consider how he went from being Mike's guardian angel to making his life a living hell in the future. I would have to agree with Sveltlana on keeping Mal's real identity a secret since remembering the truth would only hurt him more
Mal Is My King chapter 3 . 1/23/2014
Amazing.

I have no other words. Amazing.
Crystalmoon39 chapter 3 . 1/23/2014
Mike's dad is just as crazy as his mom! And now Jacob's taken another big step in becomming Mal. A lot of puzzle pieces fit together from this story!
Hikari Ino chapter 3 . 1/23/2014
great job so the others have appeared that's good
Guest chapter 3 . 1/23/2014
wooooow
shinxshinx1595 chapter 3 . 1/23/2014
Nice chapter!
BabyIt'sBrynlee chapter 2 . 1/22/2014
Gah! This is so creative, I just love it! Update soon, please! :)
Tigersfury chapter 2 . 1/20/2014
o my
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