|Reviews for Playmate|
| AQUA FIRE PHOENIX chapter 1 . 11/5
| Indra Cedar chapter 1 . 10/7
I can empathize with Harry a bit, the feeling of control that I have over my own life is something that, sometimes, was the only thing I had back then when I was younger. It's comprensible for him to be so emotional about it. Plus, with the bond, it was a negative feedback loop. There's more in life than to be destinated to a 'hot chick'
Well done author, an amazing job
| HalfBlood Prince chapter 1 . 7/17
I came looking for a comforting love,but I ended heartbroken… :C
| CrimsonAxe chapter 1 . 7/7
This reminded me of how Chrono Crusade ends. A very good anime though it only had one season. Your story was well written and I could see Harry just ending it. It would be ironic if the two were to wake up in the afterlife still bonded...
| Nysk chapter 1 . 6/29
Wow, so sad... well written but wow.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/21
Wow, dark. But well done
| Freelook chapter 1 . 3/5
This is so heartbreaking.
| CommanderTreaty chapter 1 . 2/24
So, I can see both sides. Personally, while I feel the end was well-written, I don't believe Harry would do such a thing based off his Canon character. That said, we have FanFiction for a reason. It's well written, but maybe a second chapter or different ending with the happy ever after would be a good thing, and would give us readers an idea as to the good and bad. I like your other stories, but... this one as it currently is feels... forced. Good writing, though.
| Dayside chapter 1 . 2/18
This was great. I loved seeing how this dumb fucking bond shit would actually go. I would be livid and utterly lose my fucking shit if I was in Harry's place.
| exomatt chapter 1 . 2/1
Such a well written piece.
| BarbedCaress chapter 1 . 12/23/2022
Yeah, sometimes life sucks, but I think this story took it a few steps further.
Ten years and Voldie did not find them?
I'm going to stick with the happier ending (imo) of Harry not caring enough to save himself and Gabby dying soon after because of the bond.
| Jetstream chapter 1 . 12/10/2022
Yeah, honestly, doesn't really work for me, mate. If this was possible, it'd happen all the time. Little children are selfish and impulsive. Every third Veela child would do something like this and they'd have some kind of ludicrous attrition rate.
| Lexx75 chapter 1 . 10/16/2022
Really? That's how it ends? Don't get me wrong, it's a very good story... until the epilogue. After 10 years they should have been friends with benefits at least. "Idiot Harry" at his best: he rather die than try to love a hot veela. Anyway...like i said, it's a good story, i just didn't like the ending.
| Wally991 chapter 1 . 9/22/2022
Dang, to think that there's a fic where Harry died from angstyness
| Stanislaus chapter 1 . 7/28/2022
Yo! This has to be one of the best HP one shots in the whole damn world. It was so tragic and yet so satisfying in it's conclusion. this is amazing