Good story; I very much admire the simplicity and straightforwardness of it!

The technique looks pretty interesting and the story is neat. You do a good job at capturing the hectic pace and confusion of battle, as well as characterising the protagonist while not distracting from what he could notice while in the midst of fighting.

Interesting story, reflecting the confusion in battle, and the confusion a clone feels about is existence.

That was pretty good. Pretty typical of the action on Geonosis.

Very nice. Thanks.