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| stillslightlynerdy chapter 9 . 4/22/2014
So, I have been loving this right along. The feeling is good. Your voices are wonderful. I find myself falling for Rapunzel as quickly as Anna. The warmth that suffuses this story, even when people are being grumpy and jealous (yeah, I'm talking about you Kristof) is amazing. But this ... this is the moment where I laughed out load. "walk up to girls in the marketplace and ask if they'd like to spend some quality time with the queen." And Anna thinking it might be a good idea. Marvelous! Just marvelous!
| Rose of the Wind chapter 10 . 3/29/2014
I think I might have to reread this to appreciate it in all its glory. All the little details you put in, the way you write these five characters, highlighting their similarities and differences... is pretty awesome.
And please do write that Elsa-centric sequel. There is not enough good Queer!Elsa fanfiction out there that's not Elsanna. (Unless you were planning on making it Elsanna?)
Anyway, I'm sorry that this is over, because I did really enjoy the ride. Even as smutty as that ride may have gotten at times.
| Minirowan chapter 10 . 3/28/2014
This was a nice ride, I enjoyed reading every chapter. You did a great job developing their relationships and devoted a lot of time to all of the characters, not just a select few.
I don't like yuri, but I'm sorely tempted to read that sequel about Elsa just because of your great writing. I know you'll do more than a great job with Elsa's relationship.
| Carrie Asagiri chapter 10 . 3/28/2014
I'm really gonna miss this story now. It was a pleasure being embarked in this journey for more than two months. I don't know how you did it, but I can't believe it, I mean all the smut in this chapter was beyond the smut itself, it was so emotional...maybe so realistic? I told you before in the reviews of previous chapters how this story struck me because I can feel related to several situations. You did a great work. And please write the Elsa-focused sequel! I'm dying to see your approach on her.
| KelseyO chapter 10 . 3/28/2014
It's incredibly irritating, how fucking cute all that smut was.
| counterpunch chapter 10 . 3/28/2014
"Anna knows what it costs her to say that" I love that. We all choose our words so carefully sometimes, knowing that the few things we have someone else might not have them and even bringing it up can hurt.
Elsa not liking having to apologize for Anna. Such a small detail, but I love it.
Whenever the past sneaks its way into present life and conversation, my heart falls to the floor. Every goddamn time. "Thats...its what she does."
"Oh, for-Elsa!", Elsa not getting it, knowing she doesn't quite understand the nuances of people yet, and everything that moment means. PEOPLE MAN, PEOPLE NEED PEOPLE AND ELSA HAS SO MANY PEOPLE NOW she doesn't even know what to do with herself. She's barely even thought she could be someone else's outside of Anna.
"she can see their fingerprints" fuck, thats my favorite. we change people, by something as small as existing within each other, and its a beautiful balance and settling.
Hans get out. There's too much love here for you.
"J'accuse!" what an idiot, I can't with her.
Anna asking permission tho. There are some things Anna will always always check with people first, because she spent most of her life thinking she did something wrong to the person she cared for most and it tore her life apart getting no answers. So yes. Asking is important. For lots of reasons.
Goddamn it, with your goodbyes, Elsa.
And damn Rapunzel for pulling the biggest Anna by cutting her off entirely.
"I always do." screw you, Anna.
"hang in there, Joan" screw you, Rapunzel
I'm so sad this is over, Thursday nights and Friday mornings won't be the same
| Jessy Rhian chapter 10 . 3/28/2014
Loved this so much (didn't think I would!) - will reread and review each chapter properly, I just couldn't stop reading! Really didn't want it to end! Xx
| electrictwizist chapter 10 . 3/28/2014
I was not ready. This whole chapter made me cry in the best ways. Thank you so much for writing this.
| Kina Kalamari chapter 9 . 3/24/2014
Took me longer than normal to read this because life, but it is still incredibly adorable and lovely. I loved the conversation between Kristoff and Elsa. :3
So there's only one more chapter? That's sad. But also mildly exciting. Gah.
| counterpunch chapter 9 . 3/21/2014
GLASSES, GLASSES, I LOVE THAT ELSA'S GLASSES ARE A Thing
preach it, Elsa. who WOULDNT fall for a guy like kristoff, lesbians included
That entire "By all accounts..." to the end of that section is just...such beauty and simplicty and so very very important. It's everything. Regardless of who Elsa will love, it doesn't matter, because Elsa WILL love and a) that fact is important in and of itself b) the gender is of no consequence c) what she has is more than she thought she'd ever have. So, where's the rush right now.
Elsa's never had a chance to just be Elsa, to be at peace, and she needs that time. Anna, on the other hand, has always been who she is, and all the people in her life are reflecting that. Anna was always ready for *more* and that's what this is about. More than she ever could have dreamed of. So much more that it freaked her out at first.
(Its also about fun birthday prompts, but mostly the other thing.)
"its nice that it doesn't have to hurt anymore." RUDE
I couldn't help it, my brain accidentally heard "Oh, Anna..." with Hans' voice instead of Elsa's and ow.
"ANNA, NO" my favorite two words in any fic. Heck, those two words ALONE are a fic and it never stops bringing me joy.
Anna leaning down to kiss Kristoff.
I just...I love all of these idiots so much, it hurts.
| ishidamon chapter 9 . 3/21/2014
Is my imagination or perhaps they all have been kissing each other? Thats hot.
The constellations in Anna's back and Kristoff's reading lesson with Eugene. Kristoff raising on Rapunzel to go out to the rain. And Elsa!
Oh my God! You REALLY make my week!
I wish you never end this (and I hope so) because I want more of this story. You are really good.
Kisses from México.
| electrictwizist chapter 9 . 3/21/2014
My favorite part - looking for constallatuons, the boys reading, and Kristoff carrying Rapunzel into the rain. My heart. (I'd also love a sequel with Merida/Elsa JUST SAYING I'M JUST SAYING.)
| counterpunch chapter 8 . 3/9/2014
-Anna's awe at Elsa's magic - the small things she fell in love with as a kid are the same things that still completely enrapture her. Snowing indoors indeed.
"There are no rules. Snowball fights are *war*." jhJKHFdkasdf everything up to an including "What can I say? I'm a stinker." Has me melting.
ANNA PICKPOCKETING AND LEAVING MORE MONEY, BC OF COURSE SHE WOULD ITS NOT EVEN A QUESTION.
"all she knows is she wants to memorize him like a book, leave him soft and worn and dog-eared with multiple readings." *happy doofy smiling sigh*
Everything about this, is just filling my own heart - Anna's emotions all overwhelming, the tears, Kristoff shifting just enough, and everything after….tasteful as hell, and so sweet, and I just love them so much, ok?
| Kina Kalamari chapter 8 . 3/7/2014
YES VERONICA MARS! I saw the first two seasons a couple years ago but for some reason never got around to the third. So I just finished bingeing it a couple days ago in preparation and now I am so freaking psyched for the film. Only a week left. :D
Anyway, I completely forgive you. VM is very much worth it.
And on the note of the chapter, there was so much extra adorableness. I liked that Kristoff and Rapunzel finally spent some time together. I'll admit I did skim-skip the smut, because I'm just not a smut person, but I loved the rest of it.
It's kind of crazy that this story is 45k words already. O.o
| PapierMonsta chapter 8 . 3/7/2014
I loved Kristoff and Anna's first time! You did an awsome job writing it. It was so sweet and and yet pretty hot. A great mixture! I enjoyed reading it. _